The Woods

The Woods

Jay Wilson was an ordinary 12 year old. He had good parents, he had a good school, and had good friends. One day him and Kyle (Jay's friend) had got lost in the deep woods. With only a a flashlight, energy bar, pocket knife, and 2 water canteens, Jay and Kyle must fight through the forces of nature, while finding their way back to camp.

published on August 12, 2015not completed

This is all your Fault!

Jay had then started blaming Kyle for agreeing to this adventure, and that he should've known what would happen. Kyle, remembering survival skills class, didn't blame Jay because it would make surviving even more worse. Jay had calmed down and had apologized, and Kyle accepted it.

Kyle then looked through both of their pockets and had found and energy bar and a flashlight. They both were carrying their canteens with them, full of water.  Kyle then said, "Look for logs, lets build a shelter just in case we have to stay overnight to stay put for help to come find us." Jay went out to find some logs and found a bunch.

Time had passed and it was lunchtime. They had finished the base of the shelter. Kyle then took a tiny pice of the energy bar and ate it, and so did Jay. "That should hold us off till dinner." said Kyle. Kyle then ordered Jay to find some leaves for weatherproofing the shelter. Kyle had then tried to flatten out the area for comfort. "Till dinner" Kyle said. "Till Dinner."
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great story,your vocabulary is outstanding!
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on November 24, 2015
This is so good and you are talented!
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on August 29, 2015