Him

Him

Just a story about an emo boy who fell for a not so emo girl, and how the not so emo girl fell for the emo boy.

published on September 15, 2017completed

Rival

Rival Sesa walked through the halls, wondering why he did what he did.

I mean, she's insane, but still dude. You need to apologize.
I will later, geez. Get off my back.
No, now. You know how Kara is!

He shook his head.
Maybe he actually did mess up this time.

"Damn it..." he mumbled, looking at the bracelet Kara have him When he was about 12, "I didn't mean it, moron... I didn't mean it..."

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Kara sat on her bed, looking through all the pictures they had taken.
Like the one where they were at Disney world.
Where she turned 10.
Where she found out her mom had been killed...
By her dad.

"Sesa... you hurt me. You cut me real deep. Youre still my best friend, but now..." she snipped a picture, more modern than the others, out and hugged it closely.
When she thought of him, her eyes turned purple, for adoration and love.

She bit her thumb nail, then started to laugh.
"But we're not friends anymore. Or so he says..." She looks at the picture, then to the calender.
One day until his birthday.

Her eyes lit up, and she grinned evily.
"Just because we aren't friends doesn't mean I can't give him a nice gift.~" She laughed, grabbing an old shoebox and duct tape. Then, she grabbed some fire works and a clock.
"Don't worry, Sesa!~" She smiled insanely, laughing loudly. "My gift to you will be the bomb!"
Then, she began to mix the ingredients:

Bleach
Pure acetone
Ice
A glass jar
And a separation funnel.

She laughed again, making the gas bomb. She held both of her cheeks, looking at the picture of him.
She stopped laughing, then touched his lips, imagining them again.
"You're so amazing. It's too bad I'll have to steal you, then..."

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Sesa ate lunch alone.
Had she been serious? Had he actually broke her?
His thoughts were interupted when a girl with green hair say next to him.
"Hóla, gringo. I'm Macy. Sorry if my Japanese isn't good, but I'm new here, straight from Mexico. You looked lonely, so I decided to say hi." She says, smiling at him.
He blushes a little. This girl was already hot, then she had to be emo too? Damn...
"Uh, hi. I'm Sesa." He says, shaking her hand. Soft and warm, like she was made of frigging sun shine.

"Hey, you mind me asking something, gringo?" She says, popping a piece of gum in her mouth.
He shrugged. "A question for a question."
She nods, then pops the gum bubble. "Go ahead, gringo."

"Why are you calling me a gringo? And what does that mean, anyways?" He asks, and she giggles a little.
"Well, you're American, right?" She asks, then adds, "I get another question, by the way."
He rolled his eyes. "Yeah, my dad's side is Apache Sioux."
She nods, then pops another him bubble. "It means you're white, gringo. You're not a Latino or Latina, so you're a gringo. That's why I'm calling you it."

He sighed. "But I'm Japanese."
She nods and smiles. "Exactly! You're a gringo! Or would you rather be a bendejo?" She asks, laughing.
"How's about I be myself, and that be it?" He says, gaining a little of her respect every time he said something smart.

"Wow, a smart ass gringo. How did I not expect that... Oh! I still got another question." She says, smiling a little and looking him up and down.
"Ask away, I'm an open book." He says, sipping his coke.
"Is there a gringa in your life? Ya know, a misses Sesa?" She asks, like it's no big deal.

He nearly chokes on his coke.

He had almost forgotten about Kara...
"Uh, no... why?"
She shrugs. "Cause I need someone to go to the movies with, gringo."
"Ah. Uh, I'll think about it." He says, getting up and walking away.

Macy smiled, then began talking to herself in Spanish.
"Man, that guys pretty hot..." She says, feeling a piece of paper under her hand.
"Oh..?"
She picks it up and reads it, then smiles.

Meet me at Toshika theater. 9 sharp. Come alone.

"Huh. Being a guy you'd expect him to have messy hand writting..." She says, shrugging it off and crumbling the note up and walking to her next class.

However...
Neither of them saw the pair of glowing red eyes under the table...
"He's mine, you bitch... Mine!!!"
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wow.just wow. so deep and speechless its that great:D
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How so?
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on May 03, 2018
Makes sense XD
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on May 02, 2018
idk i gusse i like that stuff im not y tho
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on April 29, 2018
WTF IS THIS
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on April 02, 2018
Wow I love romantic stories, by the way you haven't by chance seen Mirai Nikki?
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I fücking love MARAI Nikki
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cool, I thought it was cool as well
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on February 20, 2018
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on October 04, 2017
OH MI GOD!!!! CHAPTER 10!!! OMG!! LUV IT!!! <3!! @xXEmo_KingXx
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Bows*
Please, hold your applause. Naw, I'm kidding, let me have it!
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lol *huggles* This is great. Addicting. And of course legit asf.
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on September 26, 2017
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on September 26, 2017
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on September 26, 2017
No, not another cliffhanger why? @xXEmo_KingXx
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I dont like the last one. After all shes done just leaving him. NO. Use on of the first 2. This story has become my obsession. You can't stop. Or else, I will hunt you down and kill you.
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Lol fry for now
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on September 26, 2017
sorry lol
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on September 26, 2017
Facepalms*
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on September 26, 2017
Im a member i think?
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on September 26, 2017
https://www.qfeast.com/page/BKpMYZ/Stories
Here ya go! This goes to anyone who has suggestions or comments on da stories I do.
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on September 26, 2017
I am too. My email dont work so i just have to like type a certain site to be able to get on
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on September 26, 2017
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on September 26, 2017
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on September 26, 2017
Cant respond cause I'm technically a phantom account.
Ooo, I'm a phantom ooo
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on September 26, 2017
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on September 26, 2017
I'm sure you'll write more.
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on September 26, 2017
Nope. fact, I feel that the end is close indeed
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on September 26, 2017
Oh don't worry. You wouldn't try to end the story on behalf of my promise.
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on September 26, 2017
Lol sorry.
Trust me, I can't be killed that easily. I've been shot, stabbed, poisoned, electrocuted, ran over, but upside the head with more objects than I can count, drowned, ect.
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on September 26, 2017
oh and BTW dont call me sweety
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on September 26, 2017
You saying just because I'm little? Just because you are like 6 years older dont mean nothing. Heres something to remember. "It doesn't matter who, all that matters is how you do the deed."
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on September 26, 2017
XD trust me sweety. Bigger people have tried.
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on September 26, 2017
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on September 26, 2017
Evil laugh*
Well, there are 3 possible endings.
1. They get together after more tears and forgiveness

2. One, or both, dies

Or See More
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on September 26, 2017
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on September 26, 2017
OMG, must you leave me on a cliffhanger? Why? Now you have me so into this book its not even funny. Luv it as always
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on September 25, 2017
Oh mi god, Chapter 5 reminds me so much of myself its unbelieveable. I Love It.
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And people wonder why I enjoy writing. For me, writing is about reachingbour to someone and saying
Hey, kid. I know how you feel. That's why I'm writing for you.
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Yes I am, but I'm about to leave school for work. Sorry
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on September 22, 2017
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on September 22, 2017
You on ur phone?
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on September 22, 2017
Lol auto correct failed me ?
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on September 22, 2017
Oh yea you spelt it wrong thats why lol
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on September 22, 2017
Lol shakesphere? Romeo and Juliet?
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on September 22, 2017
you're 18 holy shyt its a small world!! I know poe not the other guy though. (btw im only 12)
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on September 22, 2017
Lol I'm 18 and I've been told I write like dhakedphere or poe
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on September 22, 2017
If only I could write like this.... lol nah i couldnt
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on September 22, 2017
Aww anytime!
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on September 22, 2017
I mentioned you. And it's kinda a thank you.
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on September 22, 2017
No, not yet. Why?
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on September 22, 2017
Did you see my vid I posted that reminded me of you?
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on September 22, 2017
Well, I try to give a voice to those who can't speak. So, in a way, I'm speaking for myself.
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on September 22, 2017
That's So true! Your writing just says exactly how i feel and what i can't put into words. It's just perfect.
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on September 22, 2017
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on September 22, 2017
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on September 22, 2017
This was just Wow. Can I print your stories at so I can read them at home?
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Well, since you asked, sure! I don't mind if you ask first. Just make it clear that I wrote them, k?
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ok Thx @xXEmo_KingXx
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on September 22, 2017
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on September 22, 2017
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on September 22, 2017
It's great to be able to read your stories again
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Aww, I missed you too dude! How was your summer?
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My apologizes, I seem to have drunk two Cafe Mocha's from starbucks, ate some chocolate, some candy, and my friend's soda
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on September 20, 2017
Lol so perky
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on September 20, 2017
Yay!
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on September 20, 2017
Lol just did
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on September 20, 2017
That is a great story to tell
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on September 20, 2017
Lol I know
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on September 20, 2017
Oh wow!
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on September 20, 2017
Yeah, I know. I even had one offer to arrange a marriage between me and their niece. Don't get me wrong, she was a nice girl, I just wasn't interested
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on September 20, 2017
I am sure that people you helped appreciated it too
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on September 20, 2017
Shrugs*
It was a mess here. I'm just happy I helped out someone who needed it.
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on September 20, 2017
*claps* So proud!
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on September 20, 2017
Mostly helping after the hurricane. But I also did a bit of security work here and there.
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on September 20, 2017
What work was it?
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on September 20, 2017
Lol
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on September 20, 2017
JKJK it's a Ford truck.
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on September 20, 2017
Bleh, I had to work. All summer to get my BRAND NEW LAMBORGHINI
???
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on September 20, 2017
Mine was great! Though I couldn't get on here during the summer. How about yours?
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on September 20, 2017
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on September 20, 2017
aww, s'cute. You should publish and sell your books. Lots of kids would love them.
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I would, but a lot of my books end in tragedy.
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I prefer those kind instead of fairy tales
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on September 20, 2017
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on September 20, 2017
Good Job! I feel as if I'm in the story and TBH it relates to me. I'm like Kara I've had a crush on this guy ever since I met him, but I don't know if he likes me.
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We'll see how it happens.
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on September 19, 2017