Divergent - Sonic Style (The Story)

Divergent - Sonic Style (The Story)

At long last, it's here! You've been waiting for it, and it's the story of Divergent, told in the style of Sonic the Hedgehog!!! The actual Sonic characters are the leaders/representatives, whilst the confirmed OC's are the initiates.

published on May 12, 2014not completed

Meeting New Friends

Sapphire
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And as the final Abnegation dependent makes her decision - Amity - it's time to leave.
The Dauntless exit first, cool and calm. Not like them.
We take the steps to the exit, which is rather strange for me. Normally, the Abnegation offer us their place in the lift, and they take the steps. But then I realise something; taking the steps is only one type of act for Dauntless: a wild, and brave act.
And I'm right. Because they start running, screaming, shouting into the streets, blocking the buses and taking up the whole road. And as they climb up these orange stands onto the railway, I look up. Only the Dauntless use the train in the City. But this is my only way if I don't wanna be factionless. So I too climb. And everyone is able to make it to the rail.
The train approaches within a few seconds, and we start at a jogging pace, which speeds to a sprint as the first car passes. I climb on and press a button to open the sliding door, when I see someone struggling to keep up. I hold my hand out to her, and she grabs it, as I pull her in.
"Thanks," she says.
"Man, that was crazy," I tell her. "I'm Sapphire."
"Jackie," she says.
"Is it me, or are they trying to kill us?" I ask, and Jackie giggles.

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Leat
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Oh my God!
The train is approaching this bright roof - the only roof painted white in the whole city - and the Dauntless start to jump out the train and onto the roof one by one! This makes me nervous. I knew Dauntless had to prove their bravery, but this?
A Candor girl sees me shaking. "Are you okay?"
"Just nervous," I reply.
"Come on, three of us jump together," she says.
Wait, three of us?
An Abnegation girl then steps beside the Candor girl.
Oh, her. She's the only Abnegation transfer.
So the three of us grab hands, and jump together.
And just in time.
Another second, and we would have been either factionless, or dead.
"I'm Leat," I tell them.
The Candor girl then says, "I'm Sapphire, and this is Jackie."
I'm sure we'll be good friends through initiation.
If we can make it.
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@Weiss_Schnee I am loving this story, when is the next chapter coming? Because this so cool.
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on June 21, 2018
I'm so sad she's gone it was a great story
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on March 18, 2018
The other commet you put about christina
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Because it's a spoiler, and since you haven't read the story, I can't let you know about it.
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on June 14, 2014
Don't worry, we're not far from it now anyway. Couple more bits we need to get through first.
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on June 14, 2014
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on June 14, 2014
Block what?
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on June 12, 2014
Awww! Jackie why did you block it! DX Lol Somebody tell me!
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on June 11, 2014
I think i know since I read th book :3
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on May 27, 2014
Yeah well guess what? Since you're like Christina in this, there's still more. And unfortunately you end up *This part has been blocked for spoiler reasons.*
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on May 26, 2014
^O^ I helped you on the train!
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on May 26, 2014
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on May 20, 2014
Wow, this is really cool, are the next chapter how we all meet?
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on May 17, 2014
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on May 14, 2014
WOOHOO! AWESOME! SO LEAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on May 13, 2014
I was planning to XD
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on May 13, 2014
On part two, can you put Leat's P.O.V.? Please?
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on May 13, 2014
Nice!
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on May 13, 2014
Thumbs up!
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on May 13, 2014
Like in Divergent itself, Tris is Divergent, she's a transfer, but a Dauntless-born (Uriah) is also Divergent, though it is not confirmed until the 2nd book, Insurgent.
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on May 12, 2014
Nice! But BOTH are Divergent? Really? XD That was unexpected.
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on May 12, 2014
cool!
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on May 12, 2014
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on May 12, 2014
Glad you like it :)
There's still more to come. And it's not just told from Jackie's view, oh no!
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on May 12, 2014
Awesome!!
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on May 12, 2014