Alice in Wonderland?

Alice in Wonderland?

Alice goes mad in the real world, and ends up going to Wonderland once more, only to realize that Wonderland is anything but full of magic

published on December 29, 2015not completed

The War

"Well...I must be going." I said as I stood up, still staring at the teeth stuck in the table. "LEAVING THO THOON!?" The rabbit shouted as he plucked his teeth out of the table and threw them at the Hatter, who caught them in a tea cup. "Yes...I must go." I said as I brushed off my dress, my hands stopped moving when a cup was hurled at my stomach, the blood splattered all over my dress, I watched as the cup shattered on the ground, then looked down at my dress. The red stains were already settling in for it's life long stay, my skin soon felt sticky and cold.
I looked up to see the Hatter staring at me, he was standing up but leaning over the table, his hand still reached out from throwing the small cup. His face was grim and serious. "I must warn you, Alice." His voice was dark, I felt a small chill down my spine as even the Rabbit stopped screaming, he was just looking down into a cup, his one ear flattened behind him as his face was unreadable. I looked back at the Hatter, his gear turned as he slowly lowered his hand. He slowly crawled atop and across the table, until he was face to face with me.
"This isn't Wonderland anymore Alice, this is Hell. There is no happy ending, if the Red Queen gets you, there is no mercy here." He leaned closer until our noses touched. The smell of dirt, mold and blood made me cringe. "You be careful.....OR ELSE WE WONT HAVE ANOTHER TEA PARTY TOGETHER!" He shouted the last part and jumped back, his back slamming against the table, which made the rabbit laugh. I blinked a few times before I started walking away. The sound of their laughter echoed through out the woods.
"Mad aren't they~" A voice cooed in my ear, I tilted my head and looked at the Cheshire Cat. "Yes, what has happened to them?" I asked solemnly. The cat smiled more and turned upside down. "Ah the war, my dear." He said, I looked around, my gaze landed on a metal tree stump, I pushed the back of my dress back and carefully sat on the cold, bronze stump. "War? Tell me about it." I said in more of a demanding tone.
"Oh~ Alright then, the war happened ten years ago, before that this place was what you called, Wonderland. The White Queen ruled us with a soft fist. There was peace everywhere through out the land." He said as he spun around on one foot in the air. "Except-" He stopped spinning when he was facing my direction. "The Red Queen." His eye narrowed as his head tilted to the side. His body twisted in the air. "The Red Queen was furious that she wasn't in control, so what does she do hm? She starts a war. She called out every single one of her men, animals, anything or anyone she could get her greedy hands onto, and invaded Marmoreal . With everyone being so shocked at the sudden movement at the time, Marmoreal fell." He reached out his paw, then dropped. As if he were trying to show how it happened. "The Red Queen took her sister over to Crims, where she decapitated her sister. It was against our laws, but now that the White Queen has died, who made the laws?" He asked as he floated next to me. I looked at him. "The Red Queen?" I asked, he nodded.
"Well, even though she was in charge, we fought back, more and more. We were losing, so we decided to make our own warriors and use metal to fix ourselves. Some have lost their mind, like Hatter and the March hare. Poor..Poor souls..they fought so hard and long. They were good friends." He said, almost sadly. I didn't move. So the Red Queen caused all of this..."How do I make this world like it was?" I asked, the cat looked at me, its eye widened. "Fix? Oh no no dear, this place is far gone. It would take eons to fix this place." He said as he spun around in the air once more.
"Well....for starters then, what do I do to make this place free from the war?" I asked, though I already knew the answer. The Cheshire Cat looked at me, its smile grew as he floated in front of me. He placed his paws on my cheeks and gently caressed them.
"Oh, dear...dear Alice...you have to kill the Red Queen,"
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Hm so I was reading this and then I thought to myself you should update this oh and I'm going to fix some grammatical errors
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And are you Drocell now? Lololol
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XD YES
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on November 03, 2016
And Drocell is cute so there is no downside XD
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on November 03, 2016
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on November 03, 2016
I'm saying fück cause I don't wanna be Drocell
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on November 03, 2016
Nope I made it on time
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on November 03, 2016
Did you miss the bus mate?
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on November 03, 2016
FUUUUUUUUUUUUCK
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on November 03, 2016
Sucks you're Drocell now
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on November 03, 2016
No I just say that sometimes
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on November 03, 2016
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on November 03, 2016
Danke
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on November 03, 2016
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on November 03, 2016
I <3 it!!!!! XD
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Heheh yay! X3
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on March 18, 2016
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on March 18, 2016
Yo bitch you should update this or I will slap you at school
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Yay ^.^
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on March 03, 2016
Oh my...alright I'll update it
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on March 03, 2016
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on March 03, 2016
KEEP GOING!!! It's AMAZING!!
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Aw thanks! alright! X3
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on January 22, 2016
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on January 22, 2016
I love this!! Please continue!
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I messed up XD I tried fixing the title and it posted before I finished it
Its done now XDXDXD
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on January 09, 2016
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on January 09, 2016
Nice new chapter! It's freaking amazing! Keep goin'!
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Aw thanks! X3
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You're welcome!
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on December 30, 2015
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on December 30, 2015
This story is.....Fuckking awesome!Well technically its just currently a chapter....But its still great :D
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Aw thanks Ciel!
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*squints* The line between those is blurry...
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on December 30, 2015
D: D: D: D: D: D:
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on December 30, 2015
He didn't hate him he just thought he was a brat with anger issues
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on December 30, 2015
(XD meant down point.)
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on December 30, 2015
Johnathon was a good llama.....who hated Alois. His only doenpoint.
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on December 30, 2015
Johnathon never liked you though
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on December 30, 2015
May Johnathon rest in pieces...I MEAN PEACE
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on December 30, 2015
Alois do you have any words to say about Johnathon
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on December 30, 2015
RIP, Johnathon. *waves at his grave with a handkerchief*
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on December 30, 2015
His name was Johnathon and he will be missed dearly
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on December 30, 2015
XD poor llama
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on December 30, 2015
@AlliceTeea
Poor llama....
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on December 30, 2015
Don't laugh llama death is a very serious matter!!!!
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on December 30, 2015
Pffft HAHAHA
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on December 30, 2015
It would have gotten six out of five but a llama got hit by a car
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on December 30, 2015
XD That works X3
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on December 30, 2015
It gets five out of five llamas
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on December 30, 2015
Of cores! But is it really that good?
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on December 30, 2015
You know Alice in Wonderland is one of my many obsessions
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on December 30, 2015
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on December 30, 2015
Can you make another chapter? This is really good, and you should make more.
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Aw thank you!!
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on December 30, 2015
Alright :D
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on December 30, 2015
You're welcome. But I'm serious, though. You should continue it.
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on December 30, 2015
ITS FUKN BEAUTIFUL!
I want moar! =0
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I love it.xd
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My first chapter is doooone! ^_^
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on December 29, 2015
Alright have fun! X3
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on December 29, 2015
XD I would actually do that, too.
I'm going to work on mine. Soooo =/
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on December 29, 2015
The part she asks 20 questions. X3
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on December 29, 2015
X3 what's the best part so far?
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on December 29, 2015
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on December 29, 2015
Aw really? X3
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