Written in the stars: Cercavo Amore

Written in the stars: Cercavo Amore

This is the story of a young girl who has always been interested in the stars of our night sky. She longs to find out what is written in the stars and she will not stop until she does. Her best friends help her in this journey of discovery.

published on February 23, 2017not completed

Chapter Nine

The next morning, I got up later than usual as me and Surge had stayed up late last night. My sleeping problem seemed to have disappeared but every now and then it would come back and keep me up late. I checked my phone to see if Surge had texted me. He had. It read: “Morning beautiful, I’ve ordered us a table at the restaurant opposite the park and told your boss that you won’t be in today, she was fine with it. I will come and pick you up at around twelve. Love you xxx”

He was taking me out to my favourite restaurant! I rushed around getting ready and finally went downstairs, hugging Sapphire tight.

“You will never guess what happened last night!”

“What?! Tell me!” Sapphire pulled away from me and examined my excited face

“Surge proposed to me!”

“No… Way! Please tell me you said yes!” Sapphire’s shocked eyes where full of excitement with a bit of jealousy. I nodded and showed her the ring on my finger and immediately covered my ears as the flat was filled with the sound of Sapphire squealing. The next thing I knew; all I could hear was a blur of questions being fired at me,

“Sapph, Sapph! Calm down! I can’t understand a word your saying!” We both looked at each other and giggled.

“Sorry! Sorry! When’s the wedding?”

“I don’t know; we haven’t discussed it yet! He only proposed to me last night!”

“Im going to be a bridesmaid right?”

“Of course! Don’t panic! You’ll know everything!” I heard a knock at the door and smiled. Surge was here to pick me up for our date.

“I’ll get it!” Sapphire than ran to the door and opened it “Oh hey Surge! I hear that you finally had the courage to propose!”

“Yeah. May I come in?”

“Of course!” Sapphire moved aside and in walked the love of my life. He was wearing a black suit with blue highlights. He looked so smart. He walked straight over to me and hugged me tight.

“You look so beautiful my dear.” Surge pulled away and looked over me. His eyes were full of happiness and love.

“Thank you Surge. You look amazing as well.”

“AWWE! THAT IS SO CUTE!” We looked over at Sapphire and giggled. Sapph had never really seen me and Surge together so this was a first for her.

“Come on Maria, let’s get to this restaurant. We’re going to be late otherwise”
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CAN I SHIP THESE TWO NOW?!?!?!
*squealing so much*
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*giggles*
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on March 10, 2017
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on March 10, 2017
Oh man you better take shelter from Sapph!!!
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I better?
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*screams and runs into a bush, leaving my tail hanging out*
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on February 24, 2017
She wanted Surge and now he asked you out...
HIDE WOMAN!!!
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on February 24, 2017
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on February 24, 2017
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on February 24, 2017
AWWWWW WE ROOMIES
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I LOVE IT (thoughsurgeismine >:3 le grrr) XD Seriously though this is really well written, I can imagine why no one is hiring Sapphire.

Interviewer: So, tell me about yourself
Sapphire: Well, I'm- IS THAT A SQUIRREL?!
Interviewer: Sapphire-
Sapphire: LOOK AT ITS TAIL See More
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Yea!! and omg xD
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on February 24, 2017
XD omg Sapph I was like that with the red squirrel news this morning! :D
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on February 24, 2017
Do you like it though?
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on February 23, 2017
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on February 23, 2017
Ha ha!
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on February 23, 2017
O.o I meant to put *is wait I'll change that XD sorry!!
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on February 23, 2017
What do you mean "Isnt really well written"?!
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on February 23, 2017
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on February 23, 2017
WE AREEE!!
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on February 23, 2017
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on February 23, 2017
Already deep, daaaaamn!!!
You know how to hit emotions better than I can!
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Thanks... :">
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My English teacher loves it. I'm writing it In word and then C&Ping it. I didn't tell her it was going on here, but we had do to a creative writing piece for a mini assessment and I asked if I could carry this on, she asked what it was about and then said I could do this. I asked her to read over it and she loves it
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on February 23, 2017
Read it, nice job :)
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on February 23, 2017
wow... next chapter will be up in a second ^^
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on February 23, 2017
It's true, though. I normally have to force it out.
With you it's natural.
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on February 23, 2017
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