Written in the stars: Cercavo Amore

Written in the stars: Cercavo Amore

This is the story of a young girl who has always been interested in the stars of our night sky. She longs to find out what is written in the stars and she will not stop until she does. Her best friends help her in this journey of discovery.

published on February 23, 2017not completed

Chapter Eight

I couldn’t believe my ears. The love of my life, which had been written to me in the stars, just asked me to marry him. I was frozen with shock but the happiest tears of my life rolled down my face as I stared at the man before me. All I could manage was a simple nod, followed by more tears.

“Oh Honey…” Surge got up and hugged me tight “Thank you so much. You don’t know how happy I am right now” He opened the black box to reveal the prettiest engagement ring in the world. It had a nice dark blue sapphire in the middle surrounded by a cluster of diamonds, all embedded onto a golden band.

“The ring…. It’s beautiful…” I accepted the ring onto my left ring finger and smiled brightly, it was a perfect fit.

“There’s an inscription on the inside of the ring. it reads; The stars may be bright, but you, my love, are brighter” I smiled brightly.

“This must of cost so much… Surge, you didn’t have to spend so much money on me… honestly…”

“I know… But I wanted you to have something special. You don’t have a lot of valuable things and- “

“You are my most valuable thing Surge; I don’t need anything else”

“Maria… I mean that much to you…?”

“of course! Why do you think I said yes? I couldn’t live without you; this relationship was written to me in the stars!”

“What do you mean?”

“I always said that there was something written in the stars, and when you asked me out, I finally discovered what was written in the stars; Cercavo Amore. It means; I was searching for love.”

“Wow… Cercavo Amore…. That’s Italian isn’t it?”

“Yep!” Surge came and sat next to me on the fountain and pulled me into his warm embrace, smiling brightly. This was the best day of my life. I was finally marrying the guy of my dreams. People were walking past us, smiling softly and whispering things like “isn’t that sweet?” and “Ah, young love… “

“let’s get you home honey. It’s getting cold and Sapphire will wonder where you are.”

“Alright, Thank you for tonight. I love you so much”

“I love you too, my dear fiancé”
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CAN I SHIP THESE TWO NOW?!?!?!
*squealing so much*
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*giggles*
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on March 10, 2017
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on March 10, 2017
Oh man you better take shelter from Sapph!!!
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I better?
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*screams and runs into a bush, leaving my tail hanging out*
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on February 24, 2017
She wanted Surge and now he asked you out...
HIDE WOMAN!!!
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on February 24, 2017
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on February 24, 2017
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on February 24, 2017
AWWWWW WE ROOMIES
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I LOVE IT (thoughsurgeismine >:3 le grrr) XD Seriously though this is really well written, I can imagine why no one is hiring Sapphire.

Interviewer: So, tell me about yourself
Sapphire: Well, I'm- IS THAT A SQUIRREL?!
Interviewer: Sapphire-
Sapphire: LOOK AT ITS TAIL See More
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Yea!! and omg xD
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on February 24, 2017
XD omg Sapph I was like that with the red squirrel news this morning! :D
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on February 24, 2017
Do you like it though?
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on February 23, 2017
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on February 23, 2017
Ha ha!
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on February 23, 2017
O.o I meant to put *is wait I'll change that XD sorry!!
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on February 23, 2017
What do you mean "Isnt really well written"?!
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on February 23, 2017
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on February 23, 2017
WE AREEE!!
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on February 23, 2017
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on February 23, 2017
Already deep, daaaaamn!!!
You know how to hit emotions better than I can!
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Thanks... :">
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My English teacher loves it. I'm writing it In word and then C&Ping it. I didn't tell her it was going on here, but we had do to a creative writing piece for a mini assessment and I asked if I could carry this on, she asked what it was about and then said I could do this. I asked her to read over it and she loves it
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on February 23, 2017
Read it, nice job :)
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on February 23, 2017
wow... next chapter will be up in a second ^^
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on February 23, 2017
It's true, though. I normally have to force it out.
With you it's natural.
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on February 23, 2017
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on February 23, 2017
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on February 23, 2017