Written in the stars: Cercavo Amore

Written in the stars: Cercavo Amore

This is the story of a young girl who has always been interested in the stars of our night sky. She longs to find out what is written in the stars and she will not stop until she does. Her best friends help her in this journey of discovery.

published on February 23, 2017not completed

Chapter One

It was midnight on Sunday, I was standing on the balcony looking up at the stars, they always looked so pretty to me. The way that they twinkled and glowed in the night sky was so beautiful. You may be wondering; “It’s midnight, why are you not asleep?” Well, I have been finding it hard to sleep lately, my best friend, Sapphire was getting increasingly worried about me, since I used to sleep like a log.

Sapphire and I have known each other since birth, our parents were next to each other in the labour ward and had become really good friends. Sapphire was born before me; about half an hour I would say before I was born. Ever since that day, our parents have kept in touch and Sapphire and I grew up together. We went to the same school, same after school clubs. We basically did everything together, there was nothing that could separate us.

I heard Sapph mumble in the background and I knew straight away that she was waking up, so I went back inside from the balcony and closed the door.

“Maria, It’s midnight, why are you up?” I looked over at Sapphire to see the figure of a groggy human being sitting up.

“Can’t sleep” was my simple reply, in reality, I just wanted to look at the stars, to me, there has always been something written in them, I just can’t make out what that something is.

“You should really go to the doctors about that you know”
“You know I hate that place, it makes my skin crawl” I heard Sapphire sigh and get up, turning her bedside light on. We share a room in a flat because it was all I could afford at the time; I was working but it wasn’t paying enough. I was looking for another job but there weren’t any that I could apply for because I didn’t have the grades necessary.

Sapphire managed to persuade me to get in bed and go back to sleep. But, I couldn’t get the sight of the stars out of my mind. What was written in those stars? I wish I could make it out but I never will be able to. I’m just simply not clever enough.

When Sapphire and I were kids, we always went on holiday together, and wherever we went, we would take a picture of the stars in that place since we were always going abroad. I remember once, the sky was so clear, you could see the stars for miles. It was absolutely stunning. I haven’t seen another night like it since. The stars were so bright, so full of radiance, each having their own unique sparkle. People say that the night is a horrible time, it’s dark, dingy and dismal, but if they would just look up, they would see that the night time is actually a figure of beauty. To me, I prefer the night time over day time, just because of the stars.
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CAN I SHIP THESE TWO NOW?!?!?!
*squealing so much*
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*giggles*
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on March 10, 2017
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on March 10, 2017
Oh man you better take shelter from Sapph!!!
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I better?
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*screams and runs into a bush, leaving my tail hanging out*
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on February 24, 2017
She wanted Surge and now he asked you out...
HIDE WOMAN!!!
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on February 24, 2017
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on February 24, 2017
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on February 24, 2017
AWWWWW WE ROOMIES
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I LOVE IT (thoughsurgeismine >:3 le grrr) XD Seriously though this is really well written, I can imagine why no one is hiring Sapphire.

Interviewer: So, tell me about yourself
Sapphire: Well, I'm- IS THAT A SQUIRREL?!
Interviewer: Sapphire-
Sapphire: LOOK AT ITS TAIL See More
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Yea!! and omg xD
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on February 24, 2017
XD omg Sapph I was like that with the red squirrel news this morning! :D
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on February 24, 2017
Do you like it though?
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on February 23, 2017
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on February 23, 2017
Ha ha!
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on February 23, 2017
O.o I meant to put *is wait I'll change that XD sorry!!
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on February 23, 2017
What do you mean "Isnt really well written"?!
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on February 23, 2017
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on February 23, 2017
WE AREEE!!
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on February 23, 2017
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on February 23, 2017
Already deep, daaaaamn!!!
You know how to hit emotions better than I can!
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Thanks... :">
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My English teacher loves it. I'm writing it In word and then C&Ping it. I didn't tell her it was going on here, but we had do to a creative writing piece for a mini assessment and I asked if I could carry this on, she asked what it was about and then said I could do this. I asked her to read over it and she loves it
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on February 23, 2017
Read it, nice job :)
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on February 23, 2017
wow... next chapter will be up in a second ^^
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on February 23, 2017
It's true, though. I normally have to force it out.
With you it's natural.
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on February 23, 2017
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on February 23, 2017