Mobius Paradox

Mobius Paradox

Two dimensions,one peaceful and full of adventures...the other ruled by Eggman,with only a few mobians still alive or not robot. One day they have been connected, and the chaos was released. Only a few heroes can bring peace now.

published on January 14, 2016not completed

Redik's arc - Chapter 3:I wanted action...

Suddenly I heard a rumble, like something just landed near us. We were in a cave in that moment, and the roof trembled, so I took Hino and run out, just in time to avoid to be smashed by the roof of the cave.
I wanted action...why can't I shut up...
"Objective acquired"
I turned back, there was a robot, and it was pointing us with a laser.
"Damn..." I jumped sideways, dodging the bullet storm that was going out from the robot's arm.I run behind a fallen tree and put down Hino
"Stay here.I'll take this one."
"Redik..."
"Don't worry"I smiled to her to reassure her, but I was worried.This was the first battle in years all by myself,I could be out of shape.
I run towards the robot, but it was still pointing Hino. "Hey, don't distract!" I punched right in its head, but it seemed like I didn't any damage.
"Retrieve Female Mobian"
"Hey stupid piece of trash, I'm here!" It wasn't listening to me, like I wasn't there. "Hino! Run!"
She started run, and the robot fired some rockets. I managed to save Hino, when a laser hit me at the right leg, piercing it.
"Redik, your leg..." Hino was worried for me, but I hadn't time to reassure her.
"Is this all? Show me what else you got there!"I have to distract it from Hino.
I was barely standing, the pain in the leg was growing.
The robot fired from its eye the laser again. I took Hino and jumped over it, but that can turned very fast, and hit me in the back.
This time I screamed for the pain, but I was still standing.
The next time...I won't complain the absence of action.
I was terribly out of shape, I admit that. Another laser, this time I wasn't able to do a single step, only a move with the arm to parry it.
In an istant I closed my eyes, thinking that will be the end...but nothing happened.I opened my eyes, and discovered that my right arm was surrounded by a red aura.It was back...after three years I was able to summon it again.
Both the robot and Hino was staring my arm.So I took advantage of this, and using the left leg I leaped and struck that piece of trash in the face,where it had the optical sensors,living a deep mark of my fist on it and blinding it.
The robot started to fire bullets, rockets and laser in all directions for some seconds, until I extracted its core from the chest.
"Eheh, hey Hino I told you to not...Hino!" Hino was holding her bleeding arm.She had been hit by a bullet..."Hino are you ok?"
She smiled "I'm fine, don't worry. It's only a light wound"
"...Let me see it." I don't know much about medicine but maybe I can do something.
"O-ok..." She took off the jacket, revealing a wound on her left arm. Thank god...it's really a light wound.
Luckily there was a little river near, so I cleaned Hino's wound and bandaged it.
"Th-thanks..."
"Hey, what's wrong?"
"You...you got hurt because of me...I'm so sorry..."
"What? No, no that's not-"
"You got hurt because you were saving me!I'm..." she started to cry "Like the last time...I'm good only to make people hurt..."
I hugged her "Hey...hey, it's ok...it's all ok...we're fine..."
She looked at me,with the big ruby eyes weeping.I gently wiped her tears away. "Come on, stop crying.Make a smile, would you do it for me?"
She smiled. "This is the Hino I know"
She giggled "...Thank you Redik"
"You're welcome.Come on, we have to go"
"But you're hurt..."She put her hands on my leg "Grandpa Bard always told me to not use this power...but I'll do this time."
Her hands emitted a warm light, and my leg...healed. "What...how can you do this?" She didn't listened, and healed my back.
"I'm sorry for your jacket..."
"Don't worry about it,rather ,how can you do that?"
"When I do this...I share my own...life...energy..." She fainted, but I catch her before falling.
She's sharing her own life energy...with me?
I started to walk, holding Hino in my arms. I found another cave, and lied her gently on the ground.
I stayed out of the cave, doing the guard, thinking.
Damn...in that ambush we lost our backpacks...I have to find something to eat. I went, but I returned with...nothing but some berries...
I'll save these for Hino. Hino...I lied near her, and she hugged me in the sleep...and I did the same wih her "...Thanks Hino..."
"...Dad...Mum..."
"...Don't worry, I won't let anything bad happen to you.That's a promise."
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Creepy o.O
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Point taken
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on February 25, 2016
Redik: Hey, I'm a demon after all. Without a demoniac nature what kind of demon I would be?
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on February 25, 2016
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on February 25, 2016
Whoa, f*cking dark.
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on February 25, 2016
He wants that action....
IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN! *wink wink nudge nudge*
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*Facepalm*
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XD I had to, okay?
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on February 03, 2016
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on February 03, 2016
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on February 03, 2016
REDIK'S GOT A GIRLFRIEND!!!
REDIK'S GOT A GIRLFRIEND!!!
HOO HOO HOO, I FOUND SOMETHING FOR JACKIE TO TEASE HIM ABOUT! XD
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Don't you dare
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Jackie: Alright, deal.
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: ...Ok...but don't do that again ok? I feel bad enough without these jokes.
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: I only did that to take the nightmare off my mind so I could sleep again!
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: I'm sorry that you still do that nightmare...but that is not a good reason to take pictures of someone who feel alone!
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: *nods* Under Eggman's influence...
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: Sonic that shot you?
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: Just said. I couldn't sleep that night because I had THAT nightmare again...
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: Why did you do that?
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: *winks* Snuck into your room one night when I couldn't sleep. I couldn't help myself, and took pics. Sent them to Sonic the next morning.
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: What?! Where did you take these?!
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: I know that you kissed your pillow pretending it was her! I got pics of it! *shows him*
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: You don't know that...maybe...
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: REDIK'S GOT A GIRLFRIEND! THAT HE'LL NEVER SEE AGAIN!
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on January 21, 2016
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on January 21, 2016
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on January 21, 2016
Eep... what's gonna happen to them now?
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I don't know...any idea?
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Thanks, but I have it already.Eheh.
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on January 21, 2016
I don't have any good ideas, but I know something that can help.
When I'm stuck for action ideas, I usually listen to a kick-ass music, with a kick-ass beat! Here, I'll give you one:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QImBolnTVH8
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on January 21, 2016
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on January 21, 2016
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on January 21, 2016
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW THAT MADE ME BLUSH!!!!!!
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on January 20, 2016
Ok,if someone want to be in the story, he/she has only to say it, and I will try to put him/her in.
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Okay,
Name: Scarlette the wolf
Age: 36
Looks: https://www.qfeast.com/Electpurr_the_electric_cat/profile/photo/f1aHxe
Crush: Is married to Shadow the hedgehog and has a 14 year old daughter named Mystic(what Mystic looks like):https://www.qfeast.com/page/tdwTQ9/A-page-for-when-I-run-out-space/photo/e1ZPLX See More
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Ok, I'll start to work on that.
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on January 19, 2016
Possibly 36
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on January 19, 2016
Is that right?
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on January 19, 2016
So, she had Mystic at 12...
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on January 19, 2016
Wait sorry i meant she is 26
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on January 19, 2016
Only a question: how can she have a 14 years old daughter if she's 20?
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on January 19, 2016
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on January 19, 2016
ok, give me the info and I'll put her in the story
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on January 19, 2016
Could Scarlette be in it if thats okay? I'll give you the info about her
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on January 19, 2016
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on January 19, 2016
KISS, KISS, FALL IN LOVE!
(I had to! Cuz of that kiss scene! XD)
(Lyrics from Ouran High School Host Club )
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on January 17, 2016
LOVE IT!
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Yes it's really good so far keep up the good work.
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on January 14, 2016
Really?
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on January 14, 2016
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on January 14, 2016