Mobius Paradox

Mobius Paradox

Two dimensions,one peaceful and full of adventures...the other ruled by Eggman,with only a few mobians still alive or not robot. One day they have been connected, and the chaos was released. Only a few heroes can bring peace now.

published on January 14, 2016not completed

Redik's arc - Chapter 4:The demon inside

I woke up in a dark place, I couldn't see nothing.
A voice spoke...

...Darkness...Eheheh...Pain...I want more...pain...Kill...more...make people suffer...

That voice...I don't know why but it was scaring me.
"Who's there?"

Someone you know well...eheheh...

I was nervously looking around, searching who was talking, but around me there was only darkness...
"Gh...Show yourself!"

But I'm right here, how can't you see me? Ihihih...

I looked behind me, at my right, at my left, in front of me. There was nothing.
"Who's talking?! Come on, show yourself!"
My heart was running, I was seriously scared and shivering.
"What do you have? You're a coward?"

Why don't you just...turn back...

I slowly turned back, and there was Sonic.
"Sonic! Uff...man... you scared me...how did you..."

Sonic started to shiver, and blood started to come out from his mouth.
"Sonic! What-?"
In front of my eyes, before I could do anything, Sonic's head exploded, and I found myself covered in blood.
"S...Sonic...Sonic!"

Was he a friend of yours? Eheheh...look at him...

"Sonic..." I felt on my knees. "What...what have you done!"

"Redik...help..."
I turned again, and saw...Jackie...without the arms...covered in blood... "No...NO!" All the others were there, dismembered, bleeding...calling help...
"Ghh...SHOW YOURSELF! NOW!"

Don't you want to help them? Do you want to let them suffer like this?

What I can say...I can't heal them...I...I can't save them...
"I..."

If things are like this...

Something squashed Jackie's head, cut the head of Tails, smashed Knuckles, Shadow, Scarlette, everyone...
Then that something came out of the darkness.It was...
"No...y-you're..."

It was another me...with an evil crazy smile on his face and the eyes completely black and red.
"Yes, I'm you. Hey, do you recognize these two?" He was holding Tris and Uriah in his hands. They were crying.
"No, leave them! Leave them!"
"Ok" He smashed them one against the other, killing them "Ops...Ahahahah!"
"I...I...RRRRAAAAAARGH!" I leaped against him, and hit him with a fist that pierced him from part to part.But who I hit...wasn't him.
"No! Hino!"
"How cruel...to kill such a cute girl...Ahahahah!"
"Hino...no, I...I didn't want..."
"Redik...your promise..."
The other me vanished in the darkness, leaving a huge creepy smile in the air.

I will kill everyone you love!

"WHO ARE YOU!"
A hand came out from my chest, holding...my heart...

I'm the thing you're trying to hide inside this... You are not the demon...I am.

The hand squashed my heart and then all went dark.
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Creepy o.O
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Point taken
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on February 25, 2016
Redik: Hey, I'm a demon after all. Without a demoniac nature what kind of demon I would be?
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on February 25, 2016
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on February 25, 2016
Whoa, f*cking dark.
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on February 25, 2016
He wants that action....
IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN! *wink wink nudge nudge*
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*Facepalm*
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XD I had to, okay?
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on February 03, 2016
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on February 03, 2016
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on February 03, 2016
REDIK'S GOT A GIRLFRIEND!!!
REDIK'S GOT A GIRLFRIEND!!!
HOO HOO HOO, I FOUND SOMETHING FOR JACKIE TO TEASE HIM ABOUT! XD
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Don't you dare
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Jackie: Alright, deal.
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: ...Ok...but don't do that again ok? I feel bad enough without these jokes.
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: I only did that to take the nightmare off my mind so I could sleep again!
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: I'm sorry that you still do that nightmare...but that is not a good reason to take pictures of someone who feel alone!
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: *nods* Under Eggman's influence...
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: Sonic that shot you?
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: Just said. I couldn't sleep that night because I had THAT nightmare again...
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: Why did you do that?
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: *winks* Snuck into your room one night when I couldn't sleep. I couldn't help myself, and took pics. Sent them to Sonic the next morning.
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: What?! Where did you take these?!
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: I know that you kissed your pillow pretending it was her! I got pics of it! *shows him*
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: You don't know that...maybe...
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: REDIK'S GOT A GIRLFRIEND! THAT HE'LL NEVER SEE AGAIN!
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on January 21, 2016
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on January 21, 2016
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on January 21, 2016
Eep... what's gonna happen to them now?
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I don't know...any idea?
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Thanks, but I have it already.Eheh.
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on January 21, 2016
I don't have any good ideas, but I know something that can help.
When I'm stuck for action ideas, I usually listen to a kick-ass music, with a kick-ass beat! Here, I'll give you one:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QImBolnTVH8
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on January 21, 2016
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on January 21, 2016
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW THAT MADE ME BLUSH!!!!!!
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on January 20, 2016
Ok,if someone want to be in the story, he/she has only to say it, and I will try to put him/her in.
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Okay,
Name: Scarlette the wolf
Age: 36
Looks: https://www.qfeast.com/Electpurr_the_electric_cat/profile/photo/f1aHxe
Crush: Is married to Shadow the hedgehog and has a 14 year old daughter named Mystic(what Mystic looks like):https://www.qfeast.com/page/tdwTQ9/A-page-for-when-I-run-out-space/photo/e1ZPLX See More
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Ok, I'll start to work on that.
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on January 19, 2016
Possibly 36
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on January 19, 2016
Is that right?
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on January 19, 2016
So, she had Mystic at 12...
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on January 19, 2016
Wait sorry i meant she is 26
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on January 19, 2016
Only a question: how can she have a 14 years old daughter if she's 20?
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on January 19, 2016
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on January 19, 2016
ok, give me the info and I'll put her in the story
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on January 19, 2016
Could Scarlette be in it if thats okay? I'll give you the info about her
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on January 19, 2016
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on January 19, 2016
KISS, KISS, FALL IN LOVE!
(I had to! Cuz of that kiss scene! XD)
(Lyrics from Ouran High School Host Club )
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on January 17, 2016
LOVE IT!
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Yes it's really good so far keep up the good work.
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on January 14, 2016
Really?
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on January 14, 2016
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on January 14, 2016