Mobius Paradox

Mobius Paradox

Two dimensions,one peaceful and full of adventures...the other ruled by Eggman,with only a few mobians still alive or not robot. One day they have been connected, and the chaos was released. Only a few heroes can bring peace now.

published on January 14, 2016not completed

Redik's arc - Chapter 2:Leaving the nest

I woke up...Hino was still between my arms, sleeping.
I decided to let her sleep, at least I had time to think in this way.
Where are the others now...are they safe? Images of them captured or killed invaded my mind. I shook my head to make them go away, but I woke Hino up.
"Huh...?What..."
"Sorry, I woke you up."
She...just stood there, without move, without speak, maybe still half asleep.Then she snuggled even more, a thing that surprised me.
"Good morning Redik"She said with a smile.
"Good...morning"
I went down the stairs, and saw Bard
"Good morning boy, did you sleep well?"
"Yeah, thank you"
"Are you hungry?" Rosie was already in the kitchen, preparing the breakfast.
"No thanks"
These people...it's like Eggman never existed for them...like he never tried to conquer Mobius.
Hino went down, and greeted Bard and Rose with a kiss on the cheeck.
"Thank you for your hospitality, but now I will go."
"What?Boy, you can't"
"You said until..."
"Until the storm ends, I know. But the fact is that storms here last weeks."
"What?! Weeks?!"
"Grandpa, maybe I can accompany him, I'm big enough to..."
"Hino, dear, you're still too young.You can't..."
"But I'm already 16!I can do it."
"Bard, listen to her, she's right.We can't hold her here forever."
"...Ok...You can go..."
I was a little confused "I...I don't get why I need someone who accompany me"
"...In this woods we have a rule: never go out alone with a storm" replied Bard
"Why?" I took a look to Hino, and saw that her face turned sad.
"My dad and my mum once were out.Then a storm raged. My dad managed to return, but my mum no.So he went to search her..."She was about to cry,and Rosie hugged her.
"And he never returned." Ended Bard "My son was impulsive, he never listened to the rules.If we had gone in two we would be back for sure."
"...I'm sorry. But I have to go, my friends could be in danger."
"Wait for me."Hino run upstair and came back wearing a winter jacket "Ok I'm ready."
"Are you sure you want to come?"
"Of course!"
"Be careful you two." Rosie gave us two backpacks full of food, water and jackets.
"Th-thanks"Uff, it's heavy...
We went out, and a freezy wind crushed on our faces.We said goodbye to Bard and Rose, and started walk.
In the storm I was able to see only what I had immediately in front of me, and even that barely.Every five minutes I checked behind me, to be sure that Hino was still there, and she was always there.We walked for...I don't know, the time seemed to be freezed. We took break from walking any time we found a cave or a refuge, and every time Hino slept attached to me. Not that I have displeased, but this made me blush every time.I know that was only to not let us die freezed but...that feeling of the first time we slept together...didn't leave me. I need some action...
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Creepy o.O
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Point taken
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on February 25, 2016
Redik: Hey, I'm a demon after all. Without a demoniac nature what kind of demon I would be?
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on February 25, 2016
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on February 25, 2016
Whoa, f*cking dark.
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on February 25, 2016
He wants that action....
IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN! *wink wink nudge nudge*
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*Facepalm*
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XD I had to, okay?
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on February 03, 2016
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on February 03, 2016
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on February 03, 2016
REDIK'S GOT A GIRLFRIEND!!!
REDIK'S GOT A GIRLFRIEND!!!
HOO HOO HOO, I FOUND SOMETHING FOR JACKIE TO TEASE HIM ABOUT! XD
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Don't you dare
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Jackie: Alright, deal.
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: ...Ok...but don't do that again ok? I feel bad enough without these jokes.
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: I only did that to take the nightmare off my mind so I could sleep again!
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: I'm sorry that you still do that nightmare...but that is not a good reason to take pictures of someone who feel alone!
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: *nods* Under Eggman's influence...
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: Sonic that shot you?
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: Just said. I couldn't sleep that night because I had THAT nightmare again...
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: Why did you do that?
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: *winks* Snuck into your room one night when I couldn't sleep. I couldn't help myself, and took pics. Sent them to Sonic the next morning.
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: What?! Where did you take these?!
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: I know that you kissed your pillow pretending it was her! I got pics of it! *shows him*
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on January 21, 2016
Redik: You don't know that...maybe...
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on January 21, 2016
Jackie: REDIK'S GOT A GIRLFRIEND! THAT HE'LL NEVER SEE AGAIN!
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on January 21, 2016
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on January 21, 2016
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on January 21, 2016
Eep... what's gonna happen to them now?
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I don't know...any idea?
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Thanks, but I have it already.Eheh.
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on January 21, 2016
I don't have any good ideas, but I know something that can help.
When I'm stuck for action ideas, I usually listen to a kick-ass music, with a kick-ass beat! Here, I'll give you one:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QImBolnTVH8
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on January 21, 2016
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on January 21, 2016
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on January 21, 2016
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW THAT MADE ME BLUSH!!!!!!
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on January 20, 2016
Ok,if someone want to be in the story, he/she has only to say it, and I will try to put him/her in.
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Okay,
Name: Scarlette the wolf
Age: 36
Looks: https://www.qfeast.com/Electpurr_the_electric_cat/profile/photo/f1aHxe
Crush: Is married to Shadow the hedgehog and has a 14 year old daughter named Mystic(what Mystic looks like):https://www.qfeast.com/page/tdwTQ9/A-page-for-when-I-run-out-space/photo/e1ZPLX See More
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Ok, I'll start to work on that.
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on January 19, 2016
Possibly 36
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on January 19, 2016
Is that right?
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on January 19, 2016
So, she had Mystic at 12...
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on January 19, 2016
Wait sorry i meant she is 26
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on January 19, 2016
Only a question: how can she have a 14 years old daughter if she's 20?
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on January 19, 2016
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on January 19, 2016
ok, give me the info and I'll put her in the story
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on January 19, 2016
Could Scarlette be in it if thats okay? I'll give you the info about her
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on January 19, 2016
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on January 19, 2016
KISS, KISS, FALL IN LOVE!
(I had to! Cuz of that kiss scene! XD)
(Lyrics from Ouran High School Host Club )
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on January 17, 2016
LOVE IT!
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Yes it's really good so far keep up the good work.
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on January 14, 2016
Really?
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on January 14, 2016
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on January 14, 2016