Forestclan

Forestclan

Young Aquashine only memory of her birth clan is leaving and she seeks her history and what lies ahead in the future and find out about a prophesied cat before her named Silverflight for she is the only adult cat left from the previous generation with the villains known as darkclaw and lightclaw.

published on December 26, 2014not completed

Message to the readers.

Message to the readers. Hey guys! I just want to thank you so much for helping this story get big and giving me tips on how to write better I know how my first chapter was pretty bad but back then I was a pretty big amateur at story's details and what not so I was mainly just like


"if I throw it out there regardless what it is they will love it!" I don't know why I was that stupid but you guys lured me out of that like how I was snakeing my quotes from the characters and how it lacked timeline in a way where I just sped things up a lot and cut it short and how I should check over my chapters at least twice before publishing and that important stuff and you kept telling me "don't worry with a little improvement this story can get pretty popular!" And just wanted me to look on the bright side of it and just make more out of that and I LOVED how you sugarcoated nothing because the more I'm spoiled on something the more often I lack getting the goal accomplished correctly usually but I swear I'm trying my best to fit forestclan into my right schedule because every week I'm watching little kids for parents,going to classes,doing chores,trying to fix my sleep schedule. It's just hard. And it gets harder every year because there's more to do and there's more priorities I need to take car eod that has to do with my physical health and emotional health and a lot of the time when I'm busy I'm multitasking everything because I also recently lost my phone and we think I left it on vibrate since I do that a lot so we are still searching for it and since I don't have my phone my parents won't let me stay home alone to work on stuff and it's just..blah anyways happy New year's and I'm so sorry I couldn't get a new chapter done tonight but like I said I'm SUPER busy with stuff and yeah I hope you have a AMAZING 2015 and I will hopefully have a new chapter later btw I'm also going to be taking in some people to help me with forestclan it was originally forestclan a whole new beginning as some of you may know because it was supposed to be a sequel to prophecy of Silverflight on my other account but the plot of the story kind of changed over the weeks leading to a story that more closer to the ways of the original warrior cats books and what not so yeah I WILL be hiring some people to help me out on the story and there will be a personal profile page where I will be accepted people to help out with the story and add characters and chapter plots with me so if you want to help with the story feel free to go to my page section on my profile and pm me or get in contact with me anyway possible and you can ask me and I will most likely accept. So yeah. HAVE A HAPPY NEW YEAR! :D and I will be having a poll determining if I should stick to the original plot or head the path we are beginning to be on.
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I love this story. Keep making more warrior cat stories.!
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on June 29, 2015
Cool :) I like it.
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Thanks!
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NP, man :3
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on December 28, 2014
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on December 28, 2014
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on December 28, 2014
This new chap is a pretty big plot twist! Awesome!
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on December 27, 2014
Thanks!! :D in the meantime you can also be reading that swanfeather fanfic too! Trust me it's pretty awesome :)
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I shall.... and I will..... AWAY!!! x3
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on December 27, 2014
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on December 27, 2014
Thanks! :D
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It's well deserved!
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on December 27, 2014
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on December 27, 2014
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on December 27, 2014
Hey guys! The 3rd/newest chapter is from a different POV of the battle going on at the falls currently! Hope you enjoy this shocker/cliffhanger!
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YAS!!!!
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I know so far the chapters are short but I'm getting a really busy schedule lately so yeah hopefully by spring when I have more free time it Will have longer chapters ^_^" hopefully it will be worth the wait!
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on December 27, 2014
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on December 27, 2014
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on December 27, 2014
Love the new chap!
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Thanks! I'm just about to write a new chapter!
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on December 27, 2014
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on December 27, 2014
The second chapter is really good, you have definitely improved your style!
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Thanks! I've been trying mainly to pay attention to how long my sentences got I mainly do like..25 words per sentence usually.if I want what the character says to be longer I just spot it of with said,demanded,spat and then continue that sentence in a new thing :)
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on December 27, 2014
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on December 27, 2014
Omg, the second chapter is amazing, I love it.
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Well when your typing instead of talking to me I can't sense the tone of the sentence
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on December 26, 2014
Ok geez! Chill out...
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You're telling me to chill out? I am chill.
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on December 26, 2014
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on December 26, 2014
I was in the middle of doing some artwork go this for the second chapter so I saved it for a minute so I could get it done...if this is sarcasm then I don't respect it.
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It was a joke, OMG. -.-"
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on December 26, 2014
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on December 26, 2014
I love it!!!!
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on December 26, 2014
LOVE IT!!!
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on December 26, 2014
nice!
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on December 26, 2014
Awesome! I love it!
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on December 26, 2014
Nice start :)
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A few tips: It all seems a little fast-paced, and I have a feeling you could have spread this over two different chapters. Try and take things a bit slower.

Also: I think you have something called a 'snake in your sentences'. Most of your sentences are very long, without a lot of puncuation! Try to break them down into smaller parts for a more dramatic effect See More
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I'm English :P
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on December 26, 2014
:T "9-9-9"? I thought it was "9-1-1-". Well, it is in America.
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on December 26, 2014
Favourited. :)
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on December 26, 2014
XD it's ok I've had some pretty harsh stuff said to me in the past so I'm kinda used to it! Besides I don't really like it when people just sugarcoat things so yeah :) I always aim for the honest opinion :p
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on December 26, 2014
Sorry if I seemed a bit harsh :( When I'm asked to give 'constructive criticism' for others stories in class I'm just like:

Holy s*it you missed a comma! Call the ambulance I'm gonna have a nervous breakdown! And you missed a capital letter I have to dial 9-9-9. Help meeeee!
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on December 26, 2014
Ok! Thanks! I kinda messed up every now and then with stripe I have no idea why but as I was ending the chapter I for some reason kept calling her stream and didn't see it until it was published but I'm thinking to cover that mistake the pov of stream is he raced to forestclan immediately following the scent of stripe and Stream being the deputy she is she races See More
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on December 26, 2014
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