Lies

Lies

I have written a story about what can happen to you, even though we dont hear about this stuff everyday it does happen. I hope you enjoy my story. This story is for ages 11+

published on July 30, 2014completed

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I didn't want to listen to Mum so I walked right past her, strutting out the door to meet a boy.

Hand in hand, Luc and I walked to the party. As I walked through the gates, Emily and Jasmine were smoking. I didn't make eye-contact until they said "Want a puff?", I knew smoking was bad and I knew deep down that I didn't want to have a cigarette but if my two best friends were, why shouldn't I? I bent down next to Jasmine and took a puff off her cigarette, Jasmine smiled at me. I knew Jasmine was waiting for me to react but I didn't, "How was that?" Jasmine asked me. I put on a smile, "It tasted good", I said that even though I knew deep down that it was horrible.
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the grammar is a bit off but besides that! pretty good! ^-^
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on June 24, 2015
good message
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on April 11, 2015
Wonderful I Like The Message You Have Very Importent
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on November 22, 2014
Good message. :D
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on August 02, 2014
I was thinking 'oh, no, not another dirty story', but when I finished it I thought 'actually, this has a really good message'. This is a very important life story, and I wouldn't mind seeing more like it. Good job! :)
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on July 31, 2014
I like how you added to the message that girls can too, because it isn't just the boys! :Þ
But I understand your message and also, keeping secrets actually can form stress and such.
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Yes, thankyou very much !!! xx
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on July 30, 2014
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on July 30, 2014