Lies

Lies

I have written a story about what can happen to you, even though we dont hear about this stuff everyday it does happen. I hope you enjoy my story. This story is for ages 11+

published on July 30, 2014completed

Mum33

Luc became a little blunt, I guessed he was blunt because I smoked a cigarette but it was best not to ask him. The night seemed to go very quickly, and before I knew it; Luc had left with another girl so I found myself dancing with a boy called Frankie, Frankie told me that he didn't smoke or take drugs, I trusted him. During a dance,

Frankie lent in to kiss me... Me and Frankie were kissing. Jasmine and Emily didn't like Frankie so they weren't too happy when they saw me and Frankie kissing eachother but I liked Frankie so I didn't care what the girls thought of him. At the end of the night, Frankie walked me    to my street, "Which house is it?" Frankie asked, I pointed at the only house in the street with the lights turned on, I knew it; Mum had waited up for me. "Can I come in?" Frankie asked, I wasn't sure about that. I knew Mum hated me having boys over so instead Frankie gave me his number.
Join Qfeast to read the entire story!
Sign In. It is absolutely free!
5.0
Please Rate:
0.0 out of 5 from 10 users

Comments (7)

the grammar is a bit off but besides that! pretty good! ^-^
reply
About Author
Report
on June 24, 2015
good message
reply
About Author
Report
on April 11, 2015
Wonderful I Like The Message You Have Very Importent
reply
About Author
Report
on November 22, 2014
Good message. :D
reply
About Author
Report
on August 02, 2014
I was thinking 'oh, no, not another dirty story', but when I finished it I thought 'actually, this has a really good message'. This is a very important life story, and I wouldn't mind seeing more like it. Good job! :)
reply
About Author
Report
on July 31, 2014
I like how you added to the message that girls can too, because it isn't just the boys! :Þ
But I understand your message and also, keeping secrets actually can form stress and such.
reply
Yes, thankyou very much !!! xx
reply
About Author
Report
on July 30, 2014
About Author
Report
on July 30, 2014