Lies

Lies

I have written a story about what can happen to you, even though we dont hear about this stuff everyday it does happen. I hope you enjoy my story. This story is for ages 11+

published on July 30, 2014completed

Mum1

Mum never liked me having boyfriends, whenever I spoke to her about boys she would change the subject as quickly as she could.
I never knew why she didn't like me having boyfriends, she hadn't told me why but I guess that the reason is because I am her only child, well that's what my friend suggested.
One night, I walked down the stairs wearing my 'Going out clothes'. Mum heard me coming down so she walked to wave me off before I went to the party, "You cant wear that outfit" Mum told me. "Why not? Its the only decent outfit I have" I replied. "You're going to a party, your skirt is much too high, that t-shirt is showing off your stomach and what did you use to do your make-up? A paint-roller?".
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the grammar is a bit off but besides that! pretty good! ^-^
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on June 24, 2015
good message
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on April 11, 2015
Wonderful I Like The Message You Have Very Importent
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on November 22, 2014
Good message. :D
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on August 02, 2014
I was thinking 'oh, no, not another dirty story', but when I finished it I thought 'actually, this has a really good message'. This is a very important life story, and I wouldn't mind seeing more like it. Good job! :)
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on July 31, 2014
I like how you added to the message that girls can too, because it isn't just the boys! :Þ
But I understand your message and also, keeping secrets actually can form stress and such.
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Yes, thankyou very much !!! xx
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on July 30, 2014
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on July 30, 2014