Amnesia...

Amnesia...

A young female hedgehog named Yamilette wakes up in a strange world. Her quest is to find all her friends, keep them safe and to get home alive. Luna, Sapphire, Wolfie, Carmen, Arcane, Camille and Alexis are all close friends of Yamilette and will do anything to bring her back home saftly, even if it means risking thier own lives...

published on August 01, 2015not completed

"Great, your still breathing"

Yamilette's POV
I hated this. I was about to see one of my friends die in front of me, there has to be something I can do! While we all hoped back onto a crate Luna noticed how to unlock the door closest to us. There was a wheel not to fare away from the door, if we turn it the door will slowly open with each spin. Everyone was aurguing who should go and we were getting no where. I suddenly raise my head.
"I'll go!"
"Wait! We need something to destract the monster with..." Arcane says looking around. Camille spots the crowbar that Alexis dropped and picks it up.
"Here, I'll throw this to destract the monster!" She throws it as far as she can go and the monster follows it leaving a petrified Alexis clutching her crate.
"Thank you!" She says standing up shakily. Luna saw the monster reach the crowbar and she shouts.
"Arcane! Can you help me? We need to find more thingst= to destract the monster with"
"Aready on it!" Arcane answer picking up a brick and throwing it near the monster.
"This is it" I whipsers. "My turn!" I run towards the wheel and try to turn it.
"Its to heavy!" I yell. Seconds after Camille adn Alexis run over and help me turn the wheel until the door is wide open. Arcane and Luna see this and throw one last object before running towards the door. Me, Alexis and Camille follow with the monster close behind. Suddenly I jolt feeling pain rise from my ankle and fall into the water.
"Yami!" Everyone yells. I try to get up but I feel...dizzy, sleeply, tired...almost dead. I hear another splash a lot louder then before, the monster was near. Thats when I feel a violent push forward and I then feel the soft, dry ground beneth me.
"Thank you" I whisper. My vision fades and I can only hear voices. I feel someone next to me panting and gasping for air.
"Great, your still breathing" I hear them say. I couldn't tell who it was, but they saved me.
"Damn Yami...I thought I lost you" At that moment I realised who saved me...Camille.

Carmen's POV
Just to make sure I asked Wolfie to check what was outside the room.
"Do you see anything?" Sapphire asks.
"Yeah, I see a hallway with lanterns, wallpaper, a floor, scratches from the monsters and some blood stains too-"
"I GET IT!" Sapphire yells crossing her arms. I hear Wolfie chuckle as he openes the door and lets us all in after him. I still can't get out of my head what this challenge could possibly be.
"I don't think the challenge is to meet eachother, he must of wanted more then that if he made us meet so easily." I whisper. That was when I heard Wolfie howl and the floor fall beneth him.
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on July 31, 2016
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on July 31, 2016
wut happened to me next?
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I'm afraid we will never know, I don't think i'm going to contiue this unless everyone gets back into it again, i don't even remember where my notes for this story were XD
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XD I like that story
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on July 31, 2016
Then got fat and couldn't fit out the store...
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yeah the end.
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on July 31, 2016
*Sequel* They brought Wolife back through the power of Ice cream and friendship! They they bindged on icecream till the end of time XD
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on July 31, 2016
*Finishes the story* Then one day, Sapphire said screw it and took all her friends out to Ice cream...the end!
Oh yeah, Wolfie died if you wanted to know but that's not important
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on July 31, 2016
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on July 31, 2016
Please continue O.O
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Oh wow...I forgot I had this story XD
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on June 22, 2016
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on March 28, 2016
Wolfie's gone. :c
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on September 11, 2015
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on September 11, 2015
Yamilette and Camille are not sisters anymore so you might have to edit the story
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Really? What happened? But sure :3
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on August 04, 2015
Okay ^.^ changed it
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on August 04, 2015
We had diffrent ideas
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on August 04, 2015
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on August 04, 2015
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on August 04, 2015
Man! I died! :/
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You may or may not have :3
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on August 04, 2015
I know I'm just sayin'
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on August 04, 2015
Huh? It never said you was
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on August 04, 2015
Just because I'm a dog, doesn't mean I'm a burden! 3:
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on August 04, 2015
I love the story so much please continue :D
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Thanks and I am :3
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on August 01, 2015
No problem and i can't wait ;)
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on August 01, 2015
I hope there's no zom-zoms here. :c
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X3 I don't think so, no
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Yayz :3
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