Amnesia...

Amnesia...

A young female hedgehog named Yamilette wakes up in a strange world. Her quest is to find all her friends, keep them safe and to get home alive. Luna, Sapphire, Wolfie, Carmen, Arcane, Camille and Alexis are all close friends of Yamilette and will do anything to bring her back home saftly, even if it means risking thier own lives...

published on August 01, 2015not completed

"RUN!"

Yamilette's POV
I scan the merky waters ahead nervously. The grey waters swayed calmly yet knowing this place something could happen at anytime if we stepped foot in there. Yet I wasn't the only one who seemed unsettled to say the least about crossing this.
"Are you sure we can find the guys by crossing...THIS?!" Alexis asks hoping we can all just ditch crossing the water and turn back. Luna shakes her head.
"We haven't explored this part yet, everything back there has been explored. Believe me, I know" She looks back at the merky water in amusement. "We have to hurry, before that water monster comes" My eyes widen. Was she joking?! Theres a water monster?!
"A what?! You should have said that sooner!" Camille cries staring at the water as if something would jump out and get her at any second.
"I don't like this! This is terrifing! It's like school all over again!" I say earning a laugh from Arcane.
"Alright, we have to get across...for Wolfie, Carmen and Sapphire!" Everyone cheers me included yet no one moved we just stared at the water and crates floating. Hold on, crates, maybe they can balance under our wait and we can jump across not even having to go into the water! I explain my ideas to everyone and they agree. Soon everyone was on their own crate, Alexis being on the furthest one. Suddenly I hear a loud splash and turn toward the noise to see Alexis knealing over her crate. I look in the water to see she had dropped her crowbar. I hear another loud slash, and another, and another.
"RUN!" Luna yelled panicked and everyone scatterd jumping into the water and running towards the door on the further side. The monster went after the closest person, Alexis. She saw and jumped onto a crate. The monster started bashing agaist the crate until Alexis either loses balance and falls in or until the crate breaks.
"Help!" She yells clutching onto the crate. I wish I could do something to save her...

Wolfie's POV
We all sat down at a table and told Sapphire how we actully found a key, but the key didn't fit the door and instead it was knocked down by a familler monster.
"You mean, the one you saved me, Luna and Yami from?"
"Thats the one" Carmen says nodding.
"We had only just made it, we were able to trick it by Wolfie leading it under the wardrope while I pushed it on top, it's still stuck under there I think" I say. Sapphire suddenly stands up.
"We can't let this 'guy' do what he wants with us! I think he's going to mess with us till we turn insane or maybe hes going to..." She shivers. "Kill us off using this challenge hes talking about"
"Do you think the challenge is simply to find eachother?" Carmen asks, although she was saying this to herself.
"Possibly...but we can't just sit around as Sapphire said, maybe Yamilette and Luna need our help right now" I say standing.
"In that case, lets hope they are not hurt" Carmen agrees also standing. We all walk off ready to take on whatever waits us outside that door.
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on July 31, 2016
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on July 31, 2016
wut happened to me next?
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I'm afraid we will never know, I don't think i'm going to contiue this unless everyone gets back into it again, i don't even remember where my notes for this story were XD
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XD I like that story
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on July 31, 2016
Then got fat and couldn't fit out the store...
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yeah the end.
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on July 31, 2016
*Sequel* They brought Wolife back through the power of Ice cream and friendship! They they bindged on icecream till the end of time XD
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on July 31, 2016
*Finishes the story* Then one day, Sapphire said screw it and took all her friends out to Ice cream...the end!
Oh yeah, Wolfie died if you wanted to know but that's not important
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on July 31, 2016
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on July 31, 2016
Please continue O.O
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Oh wow...I forgot I had this story XD
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on June 22, 2016
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on March 28, 2016
Wolfie's gone. :c
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on September 11, 2015
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on September 11, 2015
Yamilette and Camille are not sisters anymore so you might have to edit the story
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Really? What happened? But sure :3
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on August 04, 2015
Okay ^.^ changed it
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on August 04, 2015
We had diffrent ideas
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on August 04, 2015
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on August 04, 2015
Man! I died! :/
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You may or may not have :3
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on August 04, 2015
I know I'm just sayin'
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on August 04, 2015
Huh? It never said you was
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on August 04, 2015
Just because I'm a dog, doesn't mean I'm a burden! 3:
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on August 04, 2015
I love the story so much please continue :D
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Thanks and I am :3
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on August 01, 2015
No problem and i can't wait ;)
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on August 01, 2015
I hope there's no zom-zoms here. :c
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X3 I don't think so, no
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Yayz :3
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