I Can't

I Can't

Lucy's best friend has fallen in love with her. He makes her choose. Choose between being his girlfriend or not being his friend at all.

published on August 08, 2014completed

Admitting the Truth

Drops of water landed on Lucy's face as Dylan jumped into the freezing lake water. "Hey!" She exclaimed. "You could've gotten my book wet!" Lucy set her book down on the grass. "How do you read anyway?" "It's the middle of the night!" Dylan pointed out. "Whatever.." Lucy mumbled. "Come on in! The water's great!" Her best friend exclaimed "Fine! What have I got to lose?" She ran up to the edge of the water, feeling it with her bare toes. The cold water splashed onto her feet just before she dove into the dark liquid.

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An hour passed before Dylan held Lucy's head in his hands. "Lucy, I have to tell you something." He said "Sure, anything!" Lucy replied. "I love you." "Aww, that's sweet! I love you too!" She said "No, Lucy!" Dylan yelled. "I really, really love you." Lucy just sat there, astonished. She couldn't speak. All she could feel was the grass between her fingers and Dylan's hands on the sides of her head. "I...I..." She stammered. Dylan didn't give her a chance to speak. He slowly moved his mouth towards hers. Soon they were kissing. Full on kissing. This wasn't what Lucy wanted. She didn't have a boyfriend, but she didn't want her best friend to be her boyfriend! He was like her brother. She didn't move through the whole kiss because she was too surprised. How did this happen? How? Dylan was French kissing her. Dylan. Of all people.

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The two sixteen year old's just sat there until they finally pulled away from each other. They just sat there, until Lucy ran. Ran far from there.
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write more, earthling
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Hehe, I'm writing one right now, it might take a while because it's going to be longer than this one.
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Yayayaya
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on September 13, 2014
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on September 12, 2014
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on September 12, 2014
Awesome!
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Thank you!!
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on August 16, 2014
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on August 16, 2014
omg!! Please comtinue it becuse sequels don't get attention
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Ok :D I'll either finish it today or tomorrow :D
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I already am :D
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on August 09, 2014
Just make a swquel theb
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on August 09, 2014
i cant continue it because it says completed so i either make a sequel or dont continue it
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on August 08, 2014
COOLZ!
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Thanks :D
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on August 08, 2014
Cliff hanger!! OAO
Please add more and not let this be a story with a cliff hanger and they never continued.
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i cant continue it because it says completed so i either make a sequel or dont continue it
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on August 09, 2014
Should I continue it onto that story or make a part 2 story?
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oh... i just tried again and its still not working :( @JeweledOwl812
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on August 09, 2014
I usually works for me...:(
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on August 09, 2014
but it wasnt letting me :( @JeweledOwl812
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on August 09, 2014
@kittenswag go to the last thingy and you can change it back to uncompleted
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on August 09, 2014
i cant continue it because it says completed so i either make a sequel or dont continue it @JeweledOwl812
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on August 08, 2014
Okay :) @JeweledOwl812
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on August 08, 2014
CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE
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on August 08, 2014
continue the story, dont let it end here
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i cant continue it because it says completed so i either make a sequel or dont continue it
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Yay :D
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on August 09, 2014
okay :D
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on August 09, 2014
Sequel sequel sequel (chanting)
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on August 08, 2014
Let me know if I should write more stories!
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on August 08, 2014
FIRST READER LIKA BOSS X3 This is REALLY amazing :D
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Fewf! I'm glad it's okay :) LIKE A BOSSS
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:P lol
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