The Story of Marbles the Hedgebat

The Story of Marbles the Hedgebat

Marbles lost everything her home, her family, her arms and wings. And at only 9 years old. Marbles has an amazing story and life.

published on January 26, 2015not completed

Queen Aleena's Visit

Queen Aleena's Visit
Sonia's Fiancé woke me up this morning. I'm guessing he was overdosing the happy pills because he was SMILING. Or at least it looked like he was.

Sonia's Fiancé: Get up, Marbles! Today is the big day!
Marbles: *Rubs eyes* What's the big day?
Sonia's Fiancé: Today Aleena the Hedgehog, Queen of Mobius, is visiting!
Marbles: Mobius? I thought that was a Spiritual Dance.
Sonia's Fiancé: No! Goodness, no! Mobius is a lost city.
Marbles: So, is Queen Aleena a ghost?
Sonia's Fiancé: You know nothing about our religion!
Marbles: I don't care.
Sonia's Fiancé: You will care! No get dressed! I have an elegant gown for you!
Marbles: Okay, I'll do it later.
Sonia's Fiancé: You will do it now!
Marbles: Fine. Don't yell, *Gasps*

I said the same thing to Barley!

Sonia's Fiancé: What?
Marbles: Nothing.
Sonia's Fiancé: *Leaves room*
Marbles: I should shower before I get dressed. *Goes to the bathroom*

Marbles: *Takes off clothes and take a shower* Ladadee, Ladadoo, Ladeedum. Ladadee, Ladadoo, Ladeedum. Ladadee, Ladadoo, Ladeedum. *Turns off shower* *Goes to bedroom*

Marbles: *Gets dressed* Hmm. Not bad, simpleton. *Grabs butt*
Sonia's Fiancé: What are you doing!??!
Marbles: *Blushes* Uh..
Sonia's Fiancé: The Queen will be arriving in less than-
*Trumpets play*
Sonia's Fiancé: Oh no! Queen Aleena is here! Let us go! *Grabs Arm*
Queen Aleena: *Steps out of Carriage* Hello everyone! *Looks down at Marbles* Oh! What's your name, sweetheart?
Marbles: My name is Marbles the Hedgebat, *Bows*, daughter of deceased parents!
Queen Aleena: Hello Marbles the Hedgebat, daughter of deceased parents! *Bows*
Marbles: *Giggles*
Sonia's Fiancé: Queen Aleena, I am very amazed you could make it! *Kisses hand* You may have the biggest room in the house!
Marbles: Hey! Listen up, Simpleton, that's my room!
Queen Aleena: It's okay, I will not take the biggest room.
Sonia's Fiancé: But, Queen Aleena!
Queen Aleena: I will not take the biggest room!
Sonia's Fiancé: Very well.
Male Cook: The annual feast has begun!
Queen Aleena: Oop! Time to eat!
Marbles: Food!

Sonia's Fiancé, Queen Aleena and I enjoy the big feast. Food and drinks were scattered across the dinning table. I ate until I couldn't eat.

Marbles: no... more.
Queen Aleena: I need to lie down.
Sonia's Fiancé: I suppose it is time for bed. Queen Aleena I will show you your room. Marbles, go into your room and sleep.
Marbles: Yes Simpleton. *Goes to sleep*
Queen Aleena: She's funny!

1 hour later,

Hawk: *Knocks on window*
Marbles: *Opens up the window* Hawk?
Hawk: Marbles, come on!
Marbles: Hawk, I love you-
Hawk: I know what I said, but please come with me!
Marbles: Hawk, I'm not feeing so good. I think I'll just rest.
Hawk: Oh, I I'm so sorry!
Marbles: *Kisses* it's okay.
Hawk: *Kisses back* I love you!
Marbles: I love you too.
Hawk: *Leaves*
Marbles: *Falls back asleep*
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Please continue!!!!!! Its so awesome!!!!!!!
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Thank you :) And there is going to be more chapters on the way
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Yay! Your welcome!
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on November 18, 2015
Marble is pregnant OMG! congrats!
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on October 01, 2015
It's really so far!
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Thanks. Sorry for not making chapters in a while :p
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It's fine take your time!
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on March 07, 2015
It's really good!
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Thank ;)
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