The Story of Marbles the Hedgebat

The Story of Marbles the Hedgebat

Marbles lost everything her home, her family, her arms and wings. And at only 9 years old. Marbles has an amazing story and life.

published on January 26, 2015not completed

Please... Help me

Please... Help me
Barley fell out off the tree. He died along with the Mysterious Man. Though, the Mysterious Man was gone when I went to find Barley. The worst part was that someone witnessed the whole thing. Barley's grandson.

Marbles: *Sees him* Oh my God. You saw?
Barley's Grandson: Yes.
Marbles: How much did you see?
Barley's Grandson: Everything.
Marbles: *Hugs* Oh my God! I'm so sorry!
Barley's Grandson: It wasn't your fault umm.. uh.
Marbles: *Stops Hugging* Oh! How rude of me! My name's Marbles!
Barley's Grandson: Hawk Shiftwell. *Bows and puts out hand*
Marbles: *Shakes hand* Hi.
Hawk: Oh my God! Marbles, are you okay?!!?
Marbles: Huh?

I look at my hair and body. I look like I just came out from the Junkyard.

Marbles: I'm fine! I guess.
Hawk: I can help you if you want!
Marbles: No.... It's....O......Kay..... *Passes out*
Hawk: Oh my God! *Carries Marbles*

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Marbles: *Wakes up* W-w-what?
Unknown Man: By golly you are awake!
Marbles: W-w-where am I?
Unknown Man: I am the fiancé of Sonia the Hedgehog. *Bows* Pleasure to meet you.
Marbles: *Shakes hand* Hi. I am Marbles the Hedgebat. Daughter of deceased parents.
Sonia's Fiancé: Hello Marbles the Hedgebat! Daughter of deceased parents!
Marbles: How did I get here?
Sonia's Fiancé: A young Eagle brought you here! He seemed like he was in a hurry!
Marbles: Hawk! H-h-he SAVED ME!
Sonia's Fiancé: Ah, was that his name? Hawk? Hmm. That's a "unique" name!
Marbles: I-I-I have to go!
Sonia's Fiancé: No, no, no, no! *Grabs arm* You can't go! You'll DIE out there! You fractured your skull and broke your leg!
Marbles: How long will it take to heal.
Sonia's Fiancé: Hmm. Well, it'll take.... about 2 months!
Marbles: 2 MONTHS?!!?!!?!!!?
Sonia's Fiancé:  It's way better than I thought! It could've been 1 year!
Marbles: 1 year! I have to wait for 1 year!
Sonia's Fiancé: NO! You will stay here for 2 months! No go eat! You look like your starving yourself!
Marbles: *Goes to kitchen* Wow!

The kitchen was huge! It was about 10 feet long and 20 feet high! Cooks were everywhere! They were saying something about Queen Aleena's visit.

Marbles: *Sees cookies* Ooo! *Climbs on counter*
Male Cook: No, no ,no ,no no! Get down from there! *Grabs her and puts down*
Marbles: Sonia's Fiancé told me to get some food!
Male Cook: Fine! *Grabs Cookie* Here, now shoo! Shoo!
Marbles: *Leaves*
Female Cook: Big! We have to get ready for Queen Aleena's visit! *Hits Male Cook on the head with frying pan*

Marbles: *Finishes cookie* Uhhh..... *BURPS*
Sonia's Fiancé: Excuse you!
Marbles: Sorry.
Sonia's Fiancé: *Sighs* Oh! By golly would you look at the time! Off to bed for you!
Marbles: Okay! But, where's the bathroom?
Sonia's Fiancé: Down the hall to the right.
Marbles: Thank you!

Sonia's Fiancé tucks me into the queen sized bed.

Sonia's Fiancé: Sweet dreams, Marbles!
Marbles: Yeah, sweet dreams.

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Please continue!!!!!! Its so awesome!!!!!!!
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Thank you :) And there is going to be more chapters on the way
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Yay! Your welcome!
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on November 18, 2015
Marble is pregnant OMG! congrats!
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on October 01, 2015
It's really so far!
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Thanks. Sorry for not making chapters in a while :p
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It's fine take your time!
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on March 07, 2015
It's really good!
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Thank ;)
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