The Story of Marbles the Hedgebat

The Story of Marbles the Hedgebat

Marbles lost everything her home, her family, her arms and wings. And at only 9 years old. Marbles has an amazing story and life.

published on January 26, 2015not completed

The oak tree

The oak tree "Marbles! Wake up! Wake up!"
Someone was tugging my arm. It was Barley. The smell of smoke filled the air.

Marbles: *Coughs* What's going on?
Barley: Marbles. The oak tree. It's on fire.
Marbles: On fire?!
Barley: Yes. Quickly! We must evacuate!
Marbles: Sonic!
Barley: Sonic?
Marbles: Y-y-you did this.
Barley: Me?!!?
Marbles: *Grabs Spear* *GASPS*

The spear was a sword like in the dream!

Barley: Marbles! We need to go!
Marbles: No. Barley, this is my fate. Go! Go! Go!
Barley: I'm not leaving you here!
Marbles: That's sweet.

Mini monsters pop up the floor. Their arms and legs were twisted. They looked hurt. But they weren't.

Monster #1: *Attacks*
Marbles: Barley! Go! *Pushes Barley*
Barley: *Falls off the tree*
Marbles: Oh my god! Barley!
Monster #2: *Rips out part of hair with mouth*
Marbles: *Swats off with sword*
Monster #2: *Disappears*  
Monster #3: *Chomps leg*
Marbles: W--h-o--a! *Falls*
All Monsters: *Jump on*
Marbles: AHH! HELP!
Barley: *Flies up to the top of the tree*
Marbles: Barley! I thought I killed you!
Barley: *Swats off monster* I'm a bird! I can fly!
Marbles: *Jumps up and stands* Thank the Lord! *Swats off monster*
Barley: Did these things start the fire?
Marbles: I think so! *Swats off monster* Or it might be Sonic!
Barley: Who's this Sonic guy you keep talking about?!
Marbles: I'll explain later! *Kills monster* Right now we have more trouble on our hands.
Barley: How many are left?
Marbles: 1.
Mysterious Man: 2!
Barley: W-w-what!?
Marbles: That's Sonic!
Mysterious Man: I am not Sonic! I am God!
Barley: W-w-who are you?! What are you doing with Marbles?!
Mysterious Man: I'm you! Her! God! I'm everyone!
Marbles: Barley, this is Satan himself! He won't be leaving without a fight!
Barley: *Grabs old beautiful sword* I haven't used this since World War ll!
Marbles: Are you ready?
Barley: Ready then ever!

Barley and I fight the man. He grabs me by my waist and puts his machete to my throat.

Mysterious Man: Face it Barley! Surrender or else!
Barley: Surrender this! *Grabs Mysterious Man off the tree along with him*
Marbles: NO! *Looks down the tree*

Barley is at the bottom off the tree, motionless.

Marbles: Barley! No!
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Please continue!!!!!! Its so awesome!!!!!!!
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Thank you :) And there is going to be more chapters on the way
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Yay! Your welcome!
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on December 19, 2015
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on November 18, 2015
Marble is pregnant OMG! congrats!
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on October 01, 2015
It's really so far!
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Thanks. Sorry for not making chapters in a while :p
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It's fine take your time!
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on March 07, 2015
It's really good!
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Thank ;)
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