Cancerian

Cancerian

In this world, your fate depends on your birthday. The world revolves around zodiac signs, and everything about you depends on when you were born. Once you turn 15, you get all kinds of cool, special privileges, and Celine is totally ready for her 15th birthday. What will happen when she finally turns 15?

published on October 06, 2014not completed

Boredom

Boredom As my family arrives at the races, they depart to the 30-50 section of the arena, leaving me alone at the 10-14 section. I stare longingly at the 15-29 section, wishing I could be part of them, laughing, smiling, talking, each with a certain sophisticated grace that I hope will come to me tomorrow. I sit in the last empty seat of the front row, hoping I might see my friend Jade who's already allowed in the 15-29 section. No luck. I sigh and pick up the tablet displaying the racers Citizenship Cards. Not the real ones of course, those would be FAR to valuable. The first racer's name pops up:

Name: Jay
Status: Alive
Sign: Gemini (second born)
Birth Date: June 19
Male Parent: Kenly
Male Parent Sign: Libra
Female Parent: Jevia
Female Parent Sign: Leo
Predicted Match: Aries

The Racers are sorted by most amount of wins, so this Jay guy is clearly the one to beat. Maybe when I'm 15, I'll might be a Racer. I've heard the training is pretty extensive, but wouldn't it feel wonderful, the wind flying through my hair, the rush of adrenaline for making a sharp turn. I look enviously at the intricate track. The next Racers name pops up after I give the next page command to the tablet.

Name: Amber
Status: Alive
Sign: Aries
Birth Date: March 24
Male Parent: Fynn
Male Parent Sign: Taurus
Female Parent: Elisa
Female Parent Sign: Aquarius
Predicted Match: Gemini (first born)

I flip to the third Racer.

Name: Arian
Status: Alive
Sign: Gemini (firt born)
Birth Date: June 19
Male Parent: Kenly
Male Parent Sign: Libra
Female Parent: Jevia
Female Parent Sign: Leo
Predicted Match: Scorpio

So Arian must be twins with Jay! Wow, Gemini facing off in the races. I half hope Amber might beat the two of them as to not cause too much fighting between the twins, since Gemini are really only known to fight with each other over competitive conflicts. I wish that I had a twin, but somehow The City has managed to make it so only Gemini are twins.

Most people stop looking at the program after the first three names, but I've got nothing better to do just being 14. Why is tomorrow so far away? I read the rest of the program, and then read it again. The Races will start in a few minutes, so I might as well study the course. The Races are sort of like what I've learned in history about a sport called Track and Field from Has-Been History class. The Has-Beens are the people who came before The City, who seriously only believed zodiac signs were nonsense. What would it be like to be one of the Has-Beens? I couldn't even imagine not having my fate depend on the day I was born. It must have been weird not having a set future.

Off of that topic, The Races consist of not running on the ground, bu using 0-gravity shoes to race through an extreme obstacle course. The Racers are celebrities, and if you were lucky enough to be friends with one you were basically royalty. Life must have been really boring without the races. The races start in a little over a minute, I keep a mental countdown going just to distract myself from all of this pre-Race boredom.
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Ur birthdays a say after mine.. yea boiii (I no ur female)
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on December 14, 2020
Update!
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on January 01, 2015
I like this!!!!
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on November 06, 2014
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on November 02, 2014
Name: Riley
Status: Alive
Sign: Virgo
Birth Date: August 24
Male Parent: Michel See More
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So basically you, but as an OC :)
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Oh right sorry
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on October 26, 2014
I might have to change some things, bit I'll try to keep your character close to your description. (She can't be a Racer in the story because she's a Scribe)
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on October 26, 2014
Yup :D
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on October 26, 2014
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on October 26, 2014
Cool story!
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on October 25, 2014
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on October 25, 2014
Uh, cool, except for the Fangirl thing....
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on October 25, 2014
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on October 25, 2014
@angelzx3 @Bookworm10 @Crimsonthehedgehog @CrystalDiamond2323 @Fearless @Nightcat @Ravenclaw3243 @Saltednuts @JeweledOwl812 I updated! Sorry it took me like a week! I'll try to update more often! :D
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love it!
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on October 25, 2014
Cool! Thanks! :D
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on October 25, 2014
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on October 25, 2014
When will the next chapter be updated
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Soon, I'm just busy with school and whatever, so I can't update really often.
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on October 24, 2014
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on October 24, 2014
cool!
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on October 23, 2014
Btw its really good so far :D
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on October 23, 2014
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on October 23, 2014
Did I mention I was a girl? XD
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I know :D I'll include your OC soon.
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on October 23, 2014
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on October 23, 2014
Sorry wasnt on for a long time ill start reading :D
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on October 23, 2014
I love it!
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on October 19, 2014
I'd rather just watch the Racers speed along the track than think to hard. *too
catching his breathe at the top of a hill *breath
Only things I minded :) nice writing ;) I love the idea of hover shoe racing
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Thanks! I'll have to edit that
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No prob :)
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on October 19, 2014
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on October 19, 2014
@angelzx3 @Bookworm10 @Crimsonthehedgehog @CrystalDiamond2323 @Fearless @Nightcat @Ravenclaw3243 @SaltedNuts I updated Cancerian!
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on October 19, 2014
Yus :)
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on October 19, 2014
Cool! Thanks for letting me know! :D
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on October 19, 2014
Why did they switch to the zodiac system, why is it so important?
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It will be explained later
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Ooooooooooooooh yay :)
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on October 17, 2014
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on October 16, 2014
oh vcool!!!
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on October 10, 2014
This is a great story so far! I can't wait for more chapters! :D
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on October 10, 2014
@angelzx3 @Bookworm10 @Crimsonthehedgehog @CrystalDiamond2323 @Fearless @Ravenclaw3243 @Saltednuts I updated! (@JeweledOwl812 can you check out this story?)
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uh course
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on October 10, 2014
Sure!
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on October 10, 2014
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on October 10, 2014
Im Taurus
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on October 09, 2014
Name: Jade
Status: Alive
Sign: Capricorn
Birth Date: Jan 9th
Male Parent: Mark See More
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on October 07, 2014
name: Taylor
status: alive
sign: cancer
birth date: July 7th
male parent: Bracken See More
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on October 07, 2014
I love chapter 2. XD
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Thanks :D
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on October 06, 2014
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on October 06, 2014
Name: Angel
Status: Alive
Sign: Leo
Birth Date: July 27
Male Parent: Bob See More
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on October 06, 2014
I accept Oc's just fill in the info that's on the Citizenship Card but add personality, looks, etc.
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on October 06, 2014
Im Ariean!
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Awesome! I accept Oc's just fill in the info that's on the Citizenship Card but add personality, looks, etc.
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Name: Amber
Status: Alive (and healthy! xD)
Sign: Aries
Birth Date: March 24
Male Parent: Fynn See More
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on October 06, 2014
i'm cancerian too XD
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Cool :D
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I accept OC's btw just fill in the info that's on the Citizenship Card but add personality, looks, etc.
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on October 06, 2014
I'm going to write more soon!
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on October 06, 2014
the chapter is teeny weeny though. and 15 is the age b) lindsay is 15, amethyst is 15 and all the peeps in ma new story are 15 :d
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