Cancerian

Cancerian

In this world, your fate depends on your birthday. The world revolves around zodiac signs, and everything about you depends on when you were born. Once you turn 15, you get all kinds of cool, special privileges, and Celine is totally ready for her 15th birthday. What will happen when she finally turns 15?

published on October 06, 2014not completed

Citizen Status

Citizen Status CITIZEN STATUS

Name: Celine
Status: Alive
Sign: Cancer
Birth Date: July 8
Male Parent: Blake
Male Parent's Sign: Cancer
Female Parent: Kyna
Female Parent's Sign: Aquarius
Predicted Match: Sagittarius

I stare at the card in my hands with my citizen information on it. The delivery machine had spewed it out this morning right on schedule, the day before my 15th birthday. I read and reread the words printed neatly on the card. I trace my name, the one thing all citizens know how to write in regular pen. We all just type except for Scribes who keep the Old Writings intact and practice the writing of the old generation. I wish I knew how to write more than just my name. My mother smiles as she looks over at me.

"I remember how excited I was when I first got my citizenship card. They predicted correctly I'd be matched with a Cancer," my mother reminisces.
I nod, "I'm definitely going to be looking at the Sagittarius boys at my school differently." My mother walks over to me and takes the card into her hands.
"Watch this, double tap the center of the card with your pointer finger," my mother tells me. I do as she says, and a miniature hologram of me stands on top of the card.

I gasp at the accurate details, though I know everything in The City is accurate. The mini me doesn't move or blink, just stands there. "Doesn't do much I guess," I say.
My mother nods. "It's just used as a sort of identification thing, so people know it's really you if you try to enter one of the 15+ areas." The 15+ areas are places where only people 15 or older can go, rumors have been spreading around my school for years about what's inside each of them.

"I can't wait for my birthday tomorrow," I say and sigh impatiently. My father then walks in the room. "You got your identification card?" my he asks and walks over for a closer look. I hold it up so he can see. "Double tap the center to put the hologram away Celine, it's activated by only your fingerprint," he tells me. I do as he says, and the text on the card is once more visible so that my father can read it. "Sagittarius eh?" he says with a wink. I give a small giggle and blush. "Aw come ON dad!" My father just smiles knowingly. "My friend invited us to go to The Races today remember? We have to get going," my mother tells my father and I impatiently. "Don't forget that card of yours!" my father calls over his shoulder as he walks out of the room with my mother the get appropriate clothing on for going out to The Races. I wish I could stay and read more of the card, I've heard rumors about more things you could do with it, but I have to go get ready. I get up and go into my room.
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Ur birthdays a say after mine.. yea boiii (I no ur female)
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on December 14, 2020
Update!
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on January 01, 2015
I like this!!!!
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on November 06, 2014
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on November 02, 2014
Name: Riley
Status: Alive
Sign: Virgo
Birth Date: August 24
Male Parent: Michel See More
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So basically you, but as an OC :)
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Oh right sorry
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on October 26, 2014
I might have to change some things, bit I'll try to keep your character close to your description. (She can't be a Racer in the story because she's a Scribe)
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on October 26, 2014
Yup :D
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on October 26, 2014
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on October 26, 2014
Cool story!
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on October 25, 2014
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on October 25, 2014
Uh, cool, except for the Fangirl thing....
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on October 25, 2014
@angelzx3 @Bookworm10 @Crimsonthehedgehog @CrystalDiamond2323 @Fearless @Nightcat @Ravenclaw3243 @Saltednuts @JeweledOwl812 I updated! Sorry it took me like a week! I'll try to update more often! :D
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love it!
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on October 25, 2014
Cool! Thanks! :D
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on October 25, 2014
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on October 25, 2014
When will the next chapter be updated
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Soon, I'm just busy with school and whatever, so I can't update really often.
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on October 24, 2014
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on October 24, 2014
cool!
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on October 23, 2014
Btw its really good so far :D
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on October 23, 2014
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on October 23, 2014
Did I mention I was a girl? XD
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I know :D I'll include your OC soon.
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on October 23, 2014
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on October 23, 2014
Sorry wasnt on for a long time ill start reading :D
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on October 23, 2014
I love it!
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on October 19, 2014
I'd rather just watch the Racers speed along the track than think to hard. *too
catching his breathe at the top of a hill *breath
Only things I minded :) nice writing ;) I love the idea of hover shoe racing
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Thanks! I'll have to edit that
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No prob :)
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on October 19, 2014
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on October 19, 2014
@angelzx3 @Bookworm10 @Crimsonthehedgehog @CrystalDiamond2323 @Fearless @Nightcat @Ravenclaw3243 @SaltedNuts I updated Cancerian!
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on October 19, 2014
Yus :)
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on October 19, 2014
Cool! Thanks for letting me know! :D
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on October 19, 2014
Why did they switch to the zodiac system, why is it so important?
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It will be explained later
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Ooooooooooooooh yay :)
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on October 17, 2014
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on October 16, 2014
oh vcool!!!
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on October 10, 2014
This is a great story so far! I can't wait for more chapters! :D
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on October 10, 2014
@angelzx3 @Bookworm10 @Crimsonthehedgehog @CrystalDiamond2323 @Fearless @Ravenclaw3243 @Saltednuts I updated! (@JeweledOwl812 can you check out this story?)
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uh course
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on October 10, 2014
Sure!
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on October 10, 2014
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on October 10, 2014
Im Taurus
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on October 09, 2014
Name: Jade
Status: Alive
Sign: Capricorn
Birth Date: Jan 9th
Male Parent: Mark See More
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on October 07, 2014
name: Taylor
status: alive
sign: cancer
birth date: July 7th
male parent: Bracken See More
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on October 07, 2014
I love chapter 2. XD
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Thanks :D
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on October 06, 2014
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on October 06, 2014
Name: Angel
Status: Alive
Sign: Leo
Birth Date: July 27
Male Parent: Bob See More
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on October 06, 2014
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on October 06, 2014
I accept Oc's just fill in the info that's on the Citizenship Card but add personality, looks, etc.
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on October 06, 2014
Im Ariean!
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Awesome! I accept Oc's just fill in the info that's on the Citizenship Card but add personality, looks, etc.
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Name: Amber
Status: Alive (and healthy! xD)
Sign: Aries
Birth Date: March 24
Male Parent: Fynn See More
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on October 06, 2014
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on October 06, 2014
i'm cancerian too XD
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Cool :D
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I accept OC's btw just fill in the info that's on the Citizenship Card but add personality, looks, etc.
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on October 06, 2014
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on October 06, 2014
I'm going to write more soon!
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on October 06, 2014
the chapter is teeny weeny though. and 15 is the age b) lindsay is 15, amethyst is 15 and all the peeps in ma new story are 15 :d
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