The Unleashed

The Unleashed

This is a story that is about my created character, Jack Lee. Jack Lee will battle alot of evil things like demons, angels, vampires, etc. This is my #1 story so i hope you all like it.

published on March 27, 2013completed

Chapter 15: "This isn't the end yet."

Pinhead laid Jack on the ground of the cemetary. Vanessa and Allison were there. They ran over.
"Jack!" Vanessa yelled.
Vanessa bent down and hugged Jack.
"Step aside," Pinhead said.
Vanessa moved out of the way and Pinhead snapped his fingers. Jack's wounds were gone and he stood up. Pinhead then opened a portal.
"This is a gift from God himself," Pinhead told him.
Pinhead stepped through the portal... and a woman stepped out. The portal vanished.
"F... F... Farrah?!" Jack yelled.
The woman smiled at him.
"Hello Jack," the woman replied.



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I feel like there are too many characters for a short story. ._.
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on April 27, 2013
I like it the ending was very sweet where Farrah came back lol a gift from God =) I like that lol and the sequal thing if up to you lol I just go with the flow lol
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on April 10, 2013
It's good just remember to keep an eye out for your spelling lol
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on April 03, 2013
Very good start off because it foes right to the action. This story is the type to keep u on the edge of your seat and just haves u thirsty for more lol. But one thing u wanna do Ant is since this is just writing, you don't have to put *'s when you wrote out a cuss word. But other than that, I like it so far
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on April 02, 2013
Sounds good =)
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on March 27, 2013