Sequel?
Basically, what are your comments, concerns, suggestions.. and should i do a sequel? I will leave it up to you qfeast users. Thank you so much :)
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The Unleashed
This is a story that is about my created character, Jack Lee. Jack Lee will battle alot of evil things like demons, angels, vampires, etc. This is my #1 story so i hope you all like it.
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Comments (5)
Dresden
I feel like there are too many characters for a short story. ._.
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on April 27, 2013
HellRaiserPrincess
I like it the ending was very sweet where Farrah came back lol a gift from God =) I like that lol and the sequal thing if up to you lol I just go with the flow lol
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on April 10, 2013
HellRaiserPrincess
It's good just remember to keep an eye out for your spelling lol
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on April 03, 2013
HellRaiserPrincess
Very good start off because it foes right to the action. This story is the type to keep u on the edge of your seat and just haves u thirsty for more lol. But one thing u wanna do Ant is since this is just writing, you don't have to put *'s when you wrote out a cuss word. But other than that, I like it so far
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on April 02, 2013
HellRaiserPrincess
Sounds good =)
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on March 27, 2013