The Unleashed

The Unleashed

This is a story that is about my created character, Jack Lee. Jack Lee will battle alot of evil things like demons, angels, vampires, etc. This is my #1 story so i hope you all like it.

published on March 27, 2013completed

Chapter 14: Dance With the Devil

"Where are we going to find the Devil?" Jack asked.
"I'll call Allison," Vanessa replied.
Suddenly, a portal opened below Jack and he fell in. The portal closed and vanished before Vanessa could follow him.
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Jack fell out of the portal and hit the ground. He stood up and realized he was in a cemetary.
"What the hell?" Jack asked himself.
"Not yet," a voice said from behind.
Jack turned around to see Lucifer standing there with a smile.
"Satan," Jack said.
"Now its not nice to call names," Lucifer told him. "Dick."
"Time to go back to hell," Jack said.
"Do you really want to fight me?" Lucifer asked. "Think about it. I rebelled against God because i knew that man would be evil, ruthless, and selfish. And they are without a doubt. So why punish me for being right?"
"I'm not falling for your crap," Jack said.
Jack threw the holy knife and it hit Lucifer in the chest. Lucifer just chuckled as he pulled it out and crushed it.
"Seriously?" Lucifer said. "The holy knife cant kill me. I am one of three beings that cannot be killed by it."
Jack looked shocked. Lucifer nudged his head forward and Jack flew several feet. He flew thrugh five tombstones and hit the ground hard. Lucifer was there waiting for him. Jack struggled to get up. He hit Jack with a hard uppercut and Jack flew and landed on his back.
Lucifer was standing over Jack. He had the holy knife and it was back together.
"You know," Lucifer said. "This can kill you."
Lucifer went to stab Jack. Jack rolled out of the way and got to his feet. Lucifer threw the knife through a tree.
Jack went to punch Lucifer, but Lucifer caught his fist. He lifted Jack up and kicked him hard. Jack flew and hit the ground hard.
"You can't win Jack," Lucifer told him.
"Bullcrap," Jack said.
Jack stood up and punched Lucifer in the face. Lucifer just smiled and grabbed Jack by the throat. He slammed Jack into the ground hard.
"It ends now Jack," Lucifer said.
A portal to hell began to open in the ground. Lucifer lifted Jack up and went to throw him into the pit. A knife hit Lucifer from behind. Jack then pulled Lucifer and they both fell into the pit.
Vanessa and Allison ran to the portal, but it closed before they could get there.
"Jack!" Vanessa yelled.
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Jack and Lucifer hit the ground of hell. It was very horrible of a place. A place that can't be described with words. Jack and Lucifer stood up. Jack was wore out, but Lucifer was fresh as ever.
"Welcome to hell," Lucifer said. "This is my part of Hell."
Lucifer teleported infront of Jack and hit him with a hard palm thrust to the chest. Jack flew several feet and crashed into the ground hard. Jack was hurt bad, but he refused to quit.
"You have already lost," Lucifer told him. "There is no leaving here. You are mine forever."
Jack sprang up in rage. He went for a roundhouse kick, but Lucifer caught his leg and slammed him to the ground. Lucifer picked him up by the shirt.
"You know something Jack," Lucifer said. "At first, i was going to leave you be after you fought Azazel. But now you have pissed me off."
Lucifer threw Jack to the ground hard. Jack stood up. Lucifer hit him with a hard elbow to the mouth. The blood began to flow. Jack was still standing.
"I am going to take my time with you," Lucifer told him.
Lucifer punched Jack again. Jack flew and hit the ground hard. Lucifer was already standing over him. He laid Jack against a wall and began puncing Jack over and over. Jack's face became so messed up from the beating Lucifer was giving him. Jack was dying with each punch. Lucifer lifted Jack up by the throat and held him against the wall.
"Goodbye Jack," Lucifer said.
He pulled his fist back. Hell fire formed around his fist and he was about to finish Jack off.
Suddenly, a chain wrapped around Lucifer's hand and puled him back. Jack was dropped, but he was too weak to move. He looked up to see Pinhead there.
Lucifer walked up to Pinhead and shaddered the chain. He swung at Pinhead, who teleported next to Jack. He made a portal form and carried Jack through it. It closed before Lucifer could do anything, and he was trapped once again.
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I feel like there are too many characters for a short story. ._.
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on April 27, 2013
I like it the ending was very sweet where Farrah came back lol a gift from God =) I like that lol and the sequal thing if up to you lol I just go with the flow lol
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on April 10, 2013
It's good just remember to keep an eye out for your spelling lol
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on April 03, 2013
Very good start off because it foes right to the action. This story is the type to keep u on the edge of your seat and just haves u thirsty for more lol. But one thing u wanna do Ant is since this is just writing, you don't have to put *'s when you wrote out a cuss word. But other than that, I like it so far
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on April 02, 2013
Sounds good =)
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on March 27, 2013