The Unleashed

The Unleashed

This is a story that is about my created character, Jack Lee. Jack Lee will battle alot of evil things like demons, angels, vampires, etc. This is my #1 story so i hope you all like it.

published on March 27, 2013completed

Chapter 13: "Payback's A B****!"

"Well Jack," Azazel said. "Looks lile it is finally time to settle this."
Jack didnt even say anything. He ran at Azazel with the Holy knife in hand. Azazel punched him in the face and hit him with a hard uppercut. Jack flew back, and the knife went flying. Azazel teleported infront of Jack, he caught him, and slammed him to the ground hard.
He lifted Jack up by the throat and punched him in the face twice and kicked him in the gut. Jack fell to the ground.
"You can't defeat me," Azazel told him. "If you give up, you can become my slave... or bitch... whichever you want."
"Over my dead body," Jack said.
Jack struggled to stand up. Azazel drew his knife. Jack kicked it out of his hands and hit Azazel with a roundhouse kick to the face. He punched Azazel in the face and hit him with an elbow to the mouth.
Azazel kicked Jack in the gut and Jack flew back. He crashed to the ground hard near the holy knife. He grabbed it as Azazel appeared in front of him and kicked him. Jack flew and hit the ground hard, but kept the knife in his hand.
Azazel teleported at Jack. Jack thrusted the knife out as Azazel appeared in front of him. He stabbed Azazel in the gut. He ripped the knife out and hit Azazel with a elbow to the face, knocking him to the ground.
"NOO!!" Azazel yelled. "You bastard!!!"
"I told you I would kill you," Jack said. "Payback's a bitch!"
Azazel's body turned to dust. Vanessa ran over and hugged Jack.
"You did it!!" Vanessa shouted. "But Lucifer needs stopped still."
"Lets go kick the devil's ass," Jack said.
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I feel like there are too many characters for a short story. ._.
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on April 27, 2013
I like it the ending was very sweet where Farrah came back lol a gift from God =) I like that lol and the sequal thing if up to you lol I just go with the flow lol
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on April 10, 2013
It's good just remember to keep an eye out for your spelling lol
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on April 03, 2013
Very good start off because it foes right to the action. This story is the type to keep u on the edge of your seat and just haves u thirsty for more lol. But one thing u wanna do Ant is since this is just writing, you don't have to put *'s when you wrote out a cuss word. But other than that, I like it so far
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on April 02, 2013
Sounds good =)
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on March 27, 2013