The Unleashed

The Unleashed

This is a story that is about my created character, Jack Lee. Jack Lee will battle alot of evil things like demons, angels, vampires, etc. This is my #1 story so i hope you all like it.

published on March 27, 2013completed

Chapter 12: Rise of Lucifer

"How are we going to stop it now?" Jack asked. "We have no idea where they are."
"I don't know," Vanessa said. "But we can't let Lucifer rise."
Suddenly, a portal opened near them. The lord of the cenobites walked through. It was Pinhead.
"What are you doing here?" Jack asked.
"As I said before," Pinhead replied. You are an ally of the cenobites. Therefore, I will take you to where Lucifer is rising. Now lets go."
Jack and Vanessa went through the portal.
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They found themselves in an old church. Pinhead was gone. They saw Azazel sitting in the middle of a pentagram. His head was looking down.
"Hello, Jack," Azazel said as he looked up. "You got here just in time."
"It ends now," Jack replied.
"No," Azazel said. "It is just the beginning of a new world."
Azazel stood up. He snapped his fingers and a dead man appeared. He looked to be abou Jack's height. He had brown short hair, blue jeans, and a black jacket. He had black boots and a black Tshirt.
Azazel threw ashes on the ground in the pentagram. Jack ran at him, but he punched Jack and knocked him back.
"Rise my lord," Azazel said.
A portal where the pentagram was began to open. A bright light shined out of it. Then it just shut and vanished.
"Well that was stupid," Jack said.
Suddenly, the dead guy began to move. He stood up and stretched.
"Its good to be free," he said. "Hello Jack Lee, I am the one they call... Lucifer."
"Dont get used to it," Jack told him. "Cause, I am sending you back."
"You know Jack," Lucifer said. "I dont normally do favors. But since you have impressed me so much, Azazel is required to fight you to the death. After all, he did kill your bitch... See you around."
Lucifer disappeared. Jack turned his attention to Azazel.
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I feel like there are too many characters for a short story. ._.
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on April 27, 2013
I like it the ending was very sweet where Farrah came back lol a gift from God =) I like that lol and the sequal thing if up to you lol I just go with the flow lol
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on April 10, 2013
It's good just remember to keep an eye out for your spelling lol
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on April 03, 2013
Very good start off because it foes right to the action. This story is the type to keep u on the edge of your seat and just haves u thirsty for more lol. But one thing u wanna do Ant is since this is just writing, you don't have to put *'s when you wrote out a cuss word. But other than that, I like it so far
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on April 02, 2013
Sounds good =)
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on March 27, 2013