Prologue: Prophecy
Once in a landFar far away
Stood a large kingdom
On the brink of decay
The king was a tyrant
Who was blinded by wealth
He slept in his chamber
The town in poor health
There was theft and deceit
And crime was abound
For there were only three factions
Of this poor little town
They hated each other
They fought and they bled
Then news had become
That the old king was dead
They took separate routes
Divided the three
For the world was now thriving
The people now free
But ho the Shedan
Had loved the old king
To his name they would dance
They would drink and they’d sing
They thought of a plan
That angered the gods
They’d get their revenge
Against all the odds
They snuck in the night
To A small Morphis town
They hid in the leaves
That lay on the ground
They waged war on the Morphis
Not a single soul spared
All except one
A boy with black hair
They killed the boys father
In front of his eyes
over his body he wept
With angered cries.
He went to the Kendred
Who took the boy in
They prayed to the gods
To punish the sin
The Shedan grew ears
Like that of a fox
A Curse ever so old
Left under key and locks
Their land dried up
And their crops died
They became animals themselves
Exposed from inside
One thousand years later
Events will take place
Eerily similar
To those of this day
And a war will be waged
And blood will be shed
And death will come
And paint the sky red
There will be fights
Between brothers and men
But the land will be cured
And the war will end
A secret uncovered
A dark truth indeed
What results in the end
Of a single mans greed
But a day shall come
That four heroes will stand
they’ll end the curse
And unite the land
A fatherless youth
A boy with no mother
The girl who has nothing
And the lost sisters brother
Ever so lost
The four will unite
And set on a journey
To make things right
For they suffer the curse
And will find a cure
And correct the sins
Of a world that’s impure
-Prophecy of the Factions
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I await for a new chapter of Impure to be uploaded, as many others do. I may need to re-read the story again in order to be able to fluently traverse to the next chapter, like a person traveling from one town to the next...the same but different at the same time, and must be re-read See More in order to remember...to be able to transfer from one place to the next...I suppose maybe more like following what we Americans call the Louis and Clarke trail if you were to traverse that same trail first made by them...I may have gotten a tad bit off topic....and rambled...though I cannot wait until the next chapter arrives....speaking of chapters...I should continue my story as well some time...
I may have just shut my door to my room due to my parents....watching youtube videos with more than the usual amount of swearing in them....and now I worry whether that may have been rude or not...as that door separates the two bedrooms...
*Edits*
That may also be the only one of its kind....in Tyler's hands...
I'll probably redraw Linda
CHAPTERS.
EVER.
Is there a reference picture?
I originally meant to do it digitally, but due to an incident I have to do it on paper
Where do I upload the picture?
There are grammatical errors that are bothering me, and it's a little difficult to see who's talking but the plot is great so far! Keep writing ^_^
I guess I know what I'll be reading for the rest of this day! Well done, hope to see more later!
Chapter One = Kind of confusing, and has some grammar errors that are kind of bothering me, but overall really good!
2. It will be easier to understand AND look smoother (and be grammatically correct) if you start a new line/paragraph every time someone speaks.
Mostly just those two things.