How I met BEN :)

How I met BEN :)

I met Ben by buying Majoras Mask.... for my wii? This is my story about meeting BEN and beating his 'Little Game'. But when he brings me to the C. Pasta place.... things get difficult. Do you want to know if I got along with the Creepypastas or was I the odd one out? Did I pull through the horrible nightmares or did I go CRAZY?! Did I succeed at being the creepypastas 'Little Helper' or did I fail and gain some foes? Did I survive them or more importantly SAVE THEM?!

published on February 03, 2013not completed

Abandoned House

She walked upstairs as I saw my chance to escape. She called Bens name once more. I walked to the door but hesitated. Something was missing. I turned around and looked at the portrait once more...  at who I believed to be Bens father. He seemed to be really familliar. I put it back down and walked out the door. Outside I noticed that most of the other houses had balloons on the mailboxes. I looked around somemore noticing the flowers, houses, and the scent of....   cake? I tryed to follow the scent as I walked down the street, South of Bens house. On the way I noticed a house that seemed to be abandoned. I walked up to it and I noticed a mat under my feet. Everything was torn up except that mat so I picked it up and quickly noticed a key hidden under it. BINGO!! So I picked it up and went in, looking to see if I was being watched before doing so. Once I walked in I saw writing on the first wall. I closed the door and examined it. In light blue marker wrote BEN, Larry, and Pi. I remembered hearing about them and how they supposively 'Stole' Ben's eyes. I looked at it for a short while and then walked on. I walked past a hall to an opened door and peeked inside. The room had pictures drawn by what looked like boys of different things relating to the legend of Zelda. More specificly, Majoras Mask. There were crayons all over the ground and and different wooden toys.
"I used to love playing here with my friends," I heard a voice known as BEN. I turned around and saw him looking at a picture of the mask I saw on the game, Majoras Mask.
"Larry drew this one. He's such a great artist," he said looking down at it. I was confused.
"Didn't Larry and Pi gorge out your eye?" I asked still confused.
"ALL LIES! They were my friends, not my foes," He answered.
"Wait, what? Can you please explain?" I asked him looking into his angered eyes.
"They were my friends but we had to keep it a secret. Our families didn't exacly like each other but my dad couldn't care less about me," He answered. I loked at him, shocked.
"Go explore the party why don't you?" He replied disappearing into the static of his eyes.
I walked out of the room and out of the house catching the wiff of cake once more. I followed it down the streets to a little beach with many, MANY people. I looked around, trying to find to where the past Ben was. I found him near a lake as he looked around nervousily. I wondered why. Hmmmm....
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I wanna meet ben! I love him! I wanna see him happy!
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on June 11, 2020
Nice, cool , AWWWWWWWWWSOME story (even tho I didn't read the WHOLE thing yet)
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on June 26, 2016
Ben's dad is mean. He should go to jail.
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He killed his father
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on June 11, 2020
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on June 18, 2016
PLEASE tell me it's still continued, PLEASE. It's AwEsoMe ^-^
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on April 09, 2015
R u gonna add more?
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on November 03, 2014
Me heh BEN IS MINE!
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on January 15, 2014
Awesome
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on August 28, 2013
:D Thank ya
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on July 17, 2013
Very creative!
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on July 16, 2013
:D
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on June 16, 2013
THANK YOU X)
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on March 16, 2013
5 stars!!!
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on March 10, 2013
AWESOME!!!!!!!
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on March 10, 2013
GUESS WHAT EVERBODY!! Today THIS STORY is STORY OF THE DAY!! #1!!! THANK YOU EVRYONE SO VERY,VERY MUCH!!!
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on March 02, 2013
I'm sorry I said that twice. I'm sorta worried about Ben. if anyone knows those 2 boys names or where Ben and Jeff are PLLLEEEAAASSEEE tell me. :(
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on March 02, 2013
Thanks. I'd continue but I need some help. Does anyone know those 2 or so boys who were said in another story to have gorged out Ben's eyes, drowned him, and then had cut him up into 6 or so peices? I NEED HELP! :( Ben would've reminded me but he's with Jeff now.
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on March 02, 2013
Thank you. :) I will but since Ben is off with Jeff doin' whateva I keep forgetting about the 2(or however many) boys names of who were said to have gorged out Bens eyes, drowned him, and cut him up into 6 peices. :( I never even read the story, I just heard of it and need help remembering. Someone please help me.
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on March 02, 2013
I love this!! Please continue!
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on March 01, 2013
YAY!! YOU REMEMBERED!! Everyone this is my BFF Katelyn!! OH and I'll continue the story depending on how many people commentand rate. :)
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on March 01, 2013
PPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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on February 24, 2013
PLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE, comment and subscribe. It is my first strory of BEN DROWNED so don't be harsh. Please be honest though and tell me how it is so far. :)
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on February 17, 2013