I NEVER apoligized

I NEVER apoligized

Lily and Kim are best friends but when they have a strange fight, Lily gets killed and Kim has to live through the pain of her best friend dying. She never got to say sorry!!

published on January 31, 2013completed

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The police and fire trucks were sorrounding the broken jeep.  Lily's parents were huddled over the car, looking at a bloody body.  Kim rushed over to the place and found Lily's body, LYING THERE.
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“Until my heart stops beating”
Holy swizzles Kim has a heart attack
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on March 24, 2018
LOVE IT!!!!, can I make a song for it?
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on September 01, 2016
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on November 30, 2013
that was good. it had quite an ending
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on November 10, 2013
You're a wonderful story writer. I'm so happy with your work! If you wouldn't mind, please go check out my story. Its about me dealing with 2 diseases i got. They'res a lot more detail to it in the story. But anyone can check the story out, i would love some more readers.

:* <3 :D :) ;)

- Nisha
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on November 03, 2013
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on September 05, 2013
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on August 02, 2013
good! maybe more description
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on July 07, 2013
Awww. :'(
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on April 26, 2013
That's sad :(
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on April 26, 2013
you should make a sequel to this or something
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on March 23, 2013
Great job. Dumb kindle auto corrections.
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on March 15, 2013
That was so sad. I loved the story. Graft job :)
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on March 15, 2013
Why is it so short? Could you write more?
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on March 14, 2013
IKR!
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on February 14, 2013
I would scream if that was my BFF and crie for like 4 Eva :(
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on February 14, 2013
Aaawww, so sad, and so heart touching, and believe me, I know a good story when I see it, well done!!!!!
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on February 13, 2013
i love it, have u thoht about turneing it into a play and do it at school or hire a hall
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on February 12, 2013
That's just an exaggeration;)
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on February 07, 2013
when it says that she cries until her heart stops does that mean she died at the grave or she kept crying through her whole life???
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on February 05, 2013
That's really sad:'(
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on January 31, 2013
Awesome
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on January 31, 2013