Chosen

Chosen

Every five years one child from each family 10-18 is chosen because of their abilities and Amethyst Brite is one of these. She must find out what element she controls and survive the Element Testing.

published on May 04, 2014completed

THE END

THE END Hi! It's CrystalDiamond here. I hope you all enjoyed my story! Please comment and rate! Thank you guys SO much for staying with me throughout the entire story! I endlessly thank you. Also a special thanks to Crimsonthehedgehog, (Aria) for her ENDLESS support, and MockingJayDistrict, for giving me ideas every time I was out. Now it's time to find out... What element are you?
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Is anyone else reminded of Divergent?
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I wrote this before I knew divergent existed
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Oh
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on September 29, 2014
not anymmore. its marked as completed
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on September 28, 2014
You know you can actually edit what's alredy there, right?
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on September 28, 2014
Cool
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on September 28, 2014
thanks! i'm gonna make an edited version that's longer and has no pov switches and is less cheesy
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on September 28, 2014
Wow. So basically you came up with a storyline as good as one that millions of people have read, that's really amazing. Great job! All the switching POVs are kind of confusing
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on September 28, 2014
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on September 28, 2014
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on September 28, 2014
-CHOSEN-
remembering Chosen with 72 readers, but only 20 chapters. Released's first chapter is in!

@Aliyss @Animefan224 @BlueWatermelon @BobDaCool @Coolcass22 @Creator3000 @Crimsonthehedgehog @Me1234 @JeweledOwl812 @MockingjayDistrict @SC_Q.13 @The.Girl.With.The.Glasses
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yay!who thumbed this down btw
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on August 31, 2014
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on August 31, 2014
Awesome story! Though you might want to add some paragraph breaks in the first chapter ;)
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:3 thanks and yea
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:3
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 01, 2014
Love this story!
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Reply to comments here. You can even reply to replies, but it will look weird. Qfeasters have to get used to it.
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Ok then...
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on July 12, 2014
sorry. recording this
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on July 12, 2014
What? I'm confused
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on July 12, 2014
see?
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on July 12, 2014
Like this
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on July 12, 2014
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on July 12, 2014
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on July 12, 2014
I Loved the Whole Thing, its so fascinating and like a proper book. I hope you become an author when you become older because I would surely read your books
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Aww!! Thanks
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on July 01, 2014
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on June 30, 2014
Awesome
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on June 24, 2014
I really like this! This is pretty much exactly what I want in a book!
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Thanks :D
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014
Super cool! It was awese from the beginning!
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*awesome
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Thanks! :)
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on June 13, 2014
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on June 13, 2014
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on June 13, 2014
:D I hope you enjoyed it
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on June 08, 2014
Awesome!
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on June 04, 2014
Thanks!
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on May 31, 2014
I must say, that you had a amazing beginning makingdreaders(like me) want to read more, the chapters between were full of actions si readers didnt get bored. The chapters were quite long (which I like) and you also had a amazing finish
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My first ones are about my roleplay characters/my friends' characters, biographies, last known locations, that sort of thing. Then after I'm done with all that, I will be writing the roleplay out (Some character's names were forgotten, so I had to create new names for the forgotten ones, lol)
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on June 30, 2015
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on May 31, 2014
yes...
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on May 26, 2014
yay Magic is there!!! :D
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on May 26, 2014
amazing finish!
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on May 24, 2014
:D
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on May 22, 2014
Honestly crystal, these are amazing!
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on May 22, 2014
Wow o_o Take me a couple of days to read then x
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on May 22, 2014
20 it think
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on May 21, 2014
How Many Chapters Is There Crystal? x
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on May 21, 2014
Thx!
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on May 21, 2014
Amazin' x
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on May 21, 2014
:D anytime
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on May 20, 2014
^_^ Np
I'm just grateful that you added me in it etc
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on May 20, 2014
:) thnx
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on May 20, 2014
Nah its fine
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on May 20, 2014
Srry, just that sequels don't really get as much attention as the actual story
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on May 20, 2014
No sequel
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on May 20, 2014
WRITE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE.A.SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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SEQUEL TIME XD XD XD
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on August 31, 2014
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on May 19, 2014
Sometimes i did want to make a sequel, but meh
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on May 19, 2014
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