Standing In The Rain

Standing In The Rain

Mystery, Romance, And Adventure!! ~~ This is about a girl in 10th grade, who is constantly being out shined by her sister, who is accepted into a secret organization-MUTTS (Mis Understood Teens Transaction System) Hope you love it, please comment any suggestions, comments, questions, or if you want a certain event to happen, or a certain name to be used, ask away, please!! ~~ Thanky You!! Leigh 07

published on October 30, 2012not completed

Head Quarters

........We go through it and it feels as if a train had hammered me in the stomach........

I see stone walls everywhere, a wooden desk in front of me, and a stern looking woman sitting at it, reading some important-looking papers. "This is Colonel-" Jaeze started. But I interrupted him. With a loud gasp. Just as Jaeze had started to talk, someone threw a fabric over my eyes from behind me. "Massandra. Hey! Your fine! I swear, Alex. Listen to me, okay?" I calm down and probe the blindfold with my fingers. "Okay. I think. I trust you. But what's the blindfold for? I really want to take it off." I whisper. "I know, and I'm sorry. It's standard protocol." He slipped his hand into mine and I almost gasp again. He guides me through the room. I think I can hear him open another door.

We go through it and it feels as if a train had hammered me in the stomach.

My hands shoot over my middle and my knees buckle. I fall to the hard, stone floor, my eyes watering. I cry out loud and finally settle into a whimper. But I know better than to take off my blindfold. I hear scuffling, several yelps of pain and more sickening sounds of bone against flesh. Jaeze's, yelps for pain. I groan and try to gain breath. I feel like passing out. I can't see. My blood is pounding so hard I can't hear anything. I'm afraid to say anything.

"Sit up," a commanding, deep voice says. I can't tell if he is talking to me or Jaeze so I lay still on the floor. "Now! I mean it!" I gasp again as pain shoots through my body. This time my ponytail is  pulled backwards so that my face is tilted toward the ceiling.

"Okay!" I cry. I awkwardly prop myself on my hands.

"What did you see-" He tries to say, but Jaeze screams "Don't s-" I hear a terrible gagging sound, another yell of agony matched with what sounds like a fist against a body. The man tries again. "I'm going to ask once more. What did you see right before you entered this room?"

"I don't know anything! I swear! Please, stop! Don't hurt him!" I feel sick. Not only can I barely breathe but if I keep lying then Jaeze with be suffering more and more. I don't know what to do! The blindfold is roughly ripped off of my face but I still can't see. it is so dim in the room it takes a second for my eyes to adjust. What I see makes me want to throw the fabric back over my eyes.........

(WARNING: next chapter is very visual, it describes physical pain, don't read if you have a VERY weak stomach or get nightmares easily!!!!!!)
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This is beyond amazing!
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on June 17, 2014
You have such good talent!!
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on April 24, 2013
Cool!
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on April 10, 2013
***oops I meant write, :)
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on January 12, 2013
Please wright more!!
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on January 12, 2013
Awesome story!:)
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on December 09, 2012