Paper Airplanes

Paper Airplanes

Two balconies away, a girl sits quietly. The boy took his piece of paper, and started folding it.

published on February 17, 2016not completed

Chapter 2

Chapter 2
Jordan was walking back from school. He didn’t understand why people felt the need to bully, a big problem at his school. People didn’t deserve to feel worthless and unwanted. Everyone was special and weird in their own way. A GOOD way. A way that makes everyone different.
        He shrugged his backpack higher on his shoulders. He pulled out his phone to check his texts.
        1 NEW MESSAGE.
        Jordan opened it and read:
                Yo, bro. where u gonna b 2nite?
        The boy shook his head. Alex was his best friend, and quite a dimwit at times. He never thought things through, and his mouth was too quick for his mind. It was still a complete mystery as to how he and Jordan became friends… mostly because they were polar opposites.
        He replied:
                Studying for the huge exam coming up. What about you? I’m here if you need help.
        Alex:
                XD hangin w/ paul and nic. Ur funny. I cant b leave u rlly study

        Jordan:
                Why not?

        Alex:
                B cause itll make u a dweeb.

        Jordan:
                I’d rather be a dweeb than be

        His typing was interrupted by something hitting his head. It wasn’t hard, but it was noticeable, and—funny enough—it finished what he was about to type.
The paper read: STUPID.
        He pocketed the paper, shrugged, and finished his typing.
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Oh my GOODNESS This was AMAZING!! Super awesome. ????
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on August 21, 2018
So chapter 5 is where Jordan builds paper airplanes?
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on December 23, 2016
More! This is great hope you write more soon!
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on May 11, 2016
Lovely story! I've added it to my favourites, so get writing!

Constructive criticism: You should make your chapters about 100 words longer.
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on February 19, 2016
That was so cute O^O loving the story X3
I hope you make more chapters ^-^

Well as a writer you probably want crittesism, so here :3

The story description is short & simple, yet lovely cute and got me interested. The chapters themself are pretty short, but since this is probably something you write for fun, and if you instead make more chapters instead of more See More
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Thanks! It means a lot! :)
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on February 18, 2016
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on February 17, 2016
MORE
I NEED MORE
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on February 17, 2016
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on February 17, 2016
MORREEEEE
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I just put in Chapter 2!
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YAYYY!!!!
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on February 17, 2016
XD Okay. I'm working on chapter 3.
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on February 17, 2016
I just read it.

MOORREEEE!!!!!!!
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