Human-Hedgehog

Human-Hedgehog

Let me explain this. You all remember Qfeast's very own 'sapphirethehedgehog'? She made a series of quizzes for a Sonic WWFFY (Who Will Fall For You?). I tried them out and non-stop I got Sonic! So I thought why not make a story based on it? The chapters will be told from the view of either Sonic, or my character Jackie. Also, before we start, this story is dedicated to 'sapphirethehedgehog' and 'Alexishedgebat', the stars of the Sonic WWFFY's! Their fan characters WILL appear in this story.

published on May 04, 2014not completed

Bring Me To Life

Jackie
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I stand in darkness. I can't see anything. Where am I? What's happening? Where are the others?
"Jackie?"
I hear someone calling my name. A light shines, and I walk towards it. And I see...
I see my father.
"Dad?"
"Oh my darling daughter!" He walks towards me, but he doesn't embrace me. "Look at you! You're..."
"I'm a Mobian, Dad," I tell him.
"And such a brave one, too."
I smile. He must have seen the mission from wherever he was.
"And I want you to be happy, Jackie. Go back to them. Back to Sonic."
"Really Dad?" I ask, my eyes swelling with tears.
"Yes. I know you love Sonic. Now go. Be with him."
"I'll miss you," I say.
"You'll always be my daughter, Jackie," he says, "Mobian or not."
"And you'll always be my father."
And I walk away from the light.
From my father.
And I stand in darkness again.

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I can't see anything, but I can hear people whispering. I feel around, and manage to twitch my fingers. They are wrapped in bandages.
"Look!"
"Did you see that?"
What are they talking about?
Another hand then grabs for mine. The room is so silent, that I can feel the heartbeat of whoever it is holding me.
"Jackie? Jackie it's me," a voice says. "You're gonna be okay."
Sonic's voice.
He's here. By my side.
I wrap my hand around his.
"Sonic..." I say.
I open my eyes, and Sonic is the first person I see.
He looks back towards me, and his eyes widen. He squeezes my hand and leans closer to me. I place my other hand on his cheek, and fit my mouth to his. We're both holding each other tight, afraid to let go, in case we lose each other again.
Sonic pulls back. I see his eyes swelling with tears.
And mine are too.
The others turn around, and see me awake. They all crowd round me. "JACKIE!"
"Hi guys," I say. "What happened?"
"Eggman," Alexis says.
Oh my God that's right.
The wires! On that lever!
He tried to KILL me!
Sonic helps me to stand up, and I smile, winking at him. He winks back, and walks with me to the living room.

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I'm sitting on the sofa in the living room to get some rest.
"Jackie?"
Sapphire and Alexis then enter, and sit next to me, at either side.
"We were thinking," Alexis says "of pulling a prank on the boys. You wanna join in?"
"What prank is it?" I ask.
"We're gonna turn their fur PINK!" Sapphire replies. "But we need you to grab the potion from Tails' lab while Alexis and I bake the cake."
Now THAT sounds like a cool prank!
"I'm in."
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I'm going it's been so long dude, you need to finish this, it'd be so cool
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Ik. I'm actually going to claim this story as obsolete, and make a new version. I mean, this was copied from sapphire's quizzes.
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Yeah
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on November 24, 2014
I've just read this whole story and my face in the other side of the screen is like: 8D and XD, PLEASE!!!!! Write more!!!
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on September 19, 2014
Yay Jackie!
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Woo I am awesome at singing now! XD
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on June 20, 2014
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on June 20, 2014
Eep! Go Jackie!
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on June 20, 2014
Awesme
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on June 19, 2014
Lol, I love conserts
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XD
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Sure, I don't mind :)
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on June 18, 2014
Also, the singing part up on the stage, I was thinking of adding an extra song before the one I got in my result. That okay? I was thinking Don't Stop by 5 Seconds of Summer
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on June 18, 2014
Also, can't wait for part 15! For some reason I'm always hyped up on peace serum whenever I take a quiz in your WWFFY series XD
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on June 18, 2014
Yay! Can't wait!
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on June 18, 2014
I'm about to start writing next chapter
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on June 18, 2014
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on June 18, 2014
I got the emerald. :D
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XD
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014
Aw! And yay! Its out!
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on May 22, 2014
LOL! My wwffy is confuzzling! :p
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on May 22, 2014
Lol. XD. A race to the showers!
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: THIS IS WHAT YOU GET WHEN YOU STEAL MAH GUMMY BEARS!!! X-(
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on May 10, 2014
XD BEST PRANK EVA!
Sapphire: *laughing*
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on May 10, 2014
Silver: Sorry I had Alexis gummy bears.
Everyone: WHAT!
Alexis: YOUR DEAD WEED HEAD!! *tackles Silver*.
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: *on the floor dying of laughter*
Sonic: Yes it can wait! We're still going tonight, but only if you calm down!
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Lol.
Silver: NO IT CANT!!! IT'S MY TRUE LOVE!!! DX
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: XD
Sonic: Shut up Silver, Pizza Hut can wait.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: I guess.... :(
Silver: PIZZA HUT!!! XD
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: It's just like Shadow to hide things. He doesn't like admitting things. Not after... Maria...
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Sonic would want to admit it but Shadow.... *looks down*. :(
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: So?
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Not that. Shadow is different than Sonic.
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: Why do you think that? I'm different cuz I was human, but it doesn't bother Sonic, or me.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: I know but Shadow and I are...different. :">
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: Aww come on, I'm embarrassed at the fact that everyone knows Sonic and I might be hooking up, but I'm not looking away.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Because of what they were talking about. :">
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: What's wrong Alexis? Why you looking away?
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on May 10, 2014
:"> *looks away from everyone but still laughs*.
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on May 10, 2014
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA LOVE THE PRANK!!!!!!
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on May 10, 2014
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