Human-Hedgehog

Human-Hedgehog

Let me explain this. You all remember Qfeast's very own 'sapphirethehedgehog'? She made a series of quizzes for a Sonic WWFFY (Who Will Fall For You?). I tried them out and non-stop I got Sonic! So I thought why not make a story based on it? The chapters will be told from the view of either Sonic, or my character Jackie. Also, before we start, this story is dedicated to 'sapphirethehedgehog' and 'Alexishedgebat', the stars of the Sonic WWFFY's! Their fan characters WILL appear in this story.

published on May 04, 2014not completed

Is this the end?

Is this the end? Jackie
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I wake up, and I'm in the same glass tube Eggman used to transform me into a Mobian. I look to my left, and I see Sapphire and Alexis in glass tubes of their own. Thank goodness they're okay. They turn round and see me.
"Jackie!" Alexis screams, tears swelling in her eyes.
"You're awake!" Sapphire says.
"And so she is."
Uh oh.
"Eggman!" I growl at him.
"Nice to see you again too, Jackie," Eggman says, sarcastically.
"What do you want with us?" Alexis growls at Eggman.
He points to Sapphire and Alexis. "I wanted you two out of my way!" Now he points at me. "But you Jackie, I have plans for you."
I stare at him, raising an eyebrow at him.
"What plans? What do you want with me?" I shout at him.
"Have the guys not figured it out yet? I thought Tails would have by now, with a brain like his."
"What's the point of telling you now though? You'll find out later," someone else says.
"Ah, I see your friend is here Sapphire," Eggman says as a purple hedgehog walks in, standing at the side of Sapphire's tube.
Domanic!
"Oh God!" Sapphire shouts, looking away from him. Alexis's eyes glow silver as she growls at him.
"Nice to see you again Sapphire, Alexis, Jackie," Domanic says.
"Leave us alone, you CREEP!" I shout at Domanic.
"Have you not noticed you have more wires than the others, Jackie?"
I spot some extra wires that are not attached to Sapphire or Alexis's tubes. I follow them, and they are attached to a lever, which Eggman now stands next to.
"Sweet dreams, Jackie," Eggman says, pulling the switch.
I feel a surge as if a million swords have sawed their way through my body. VERY painful! All I can do is scream.
"Jackie!" Sapphire and Alexis shout.
I then hear a loud bang, and glass shattering. A blurred figure then picks me up, and holds me in their arms.
"Sonic?"
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I'm going it's been so long dude, you need to finish this, it'd be so cool
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Ik. I'm actually going to claim this story as obsolete, and make a new version. I mean, this was copied from sapphire's quizzes.
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Yeah
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on November 24, 2014
I've just read this whole story and my face in the other side of the screen is like: 8D and XD, PLEASE!!!!! Write more!!!
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on September 19, 2014
Yay Jackie!
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Woo I am awesome at singing now! XD
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on June 20, 2014
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on June 20, 2014
Eep! Go Jackie!
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on June 20, 2014
Awesme
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on June 19, 2014
Lol, I love conserts
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XD
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Sure, I don't mind :)
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on June 18, 2014
Also, the singing part up on the stage, I was thinking of adding an extra song before the one I got in my result. That okay? I was thinking Don't Stop by 5 Seconds of Summer
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on June 18, 2014
Also, can't wait for part 15! For some reason I'm always hyped up on peace serum whenever I take a quiz in your WWFFY series XD
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on June 18, 2014
Yay! Can't wait!
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on June 18, 2014
I'm about to start writing next chapter
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on June 18, 2014
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on June 18, 2014
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on June 18, 2014
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on June 18, 2014
I got the emerald. :D
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XD
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014
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on June 16, 2014
Aw! And yay! Its out!
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on June 16, 2014
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on May 22, 2014
LOL! My wwffy is confuzzling! :p
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on May 22, 2014
Lol. XD. A race to the showers!
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: THIS IS WHAT YOU GET WHEN YOU STEAL MAH GUMMY BEARS!!! X-(
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on May 10, 2014
XD BEST PRANK EVA!
Sapphire: *laughing*
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on May 10, 2014
Silver: Sorry I had Alexis gummy bears.
Everyone: WHAT!
Alexis: YOUR DEAD WEED HEAD!! *tackles Silver*.
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: *on the floor dying of laughter*
Sonic: Yes it can wait! We're still going tonight, but only if you calm down!
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Lol.
Silver: NO IT CANT!!! IT'S MY TRUE LOVE!!! DX
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: XD
Sonic: Shut up Silver, Pizza Hut can wait.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: I guess.... :(
Silver: PIZZA HUT!!! XD
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: It's just like Shadow to hide things. He doesn't like admitting things. Not after... Maria...
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Sonic would want to admit it but Shadow.... *looks down*. :(
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: So?
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Not that. Shadow is different than Sonic.
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: Why do you think that? I'm different cuz I was human, but it doesn't bother Sonic, or me.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: I know but Shadow and I are...different. :">
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: Aww come on, I'm embarrassed at the fact that everyone knows Sonic and I might be hooking up, but I'm not looking away.
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on May 10, 2014
Alexis: Because of what they were talking about. :">
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on May 10, 2014
Jackie: What's wrong Alexis? Why you looking away?
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on May 10, 2014
:"> *looks away from everyone but still laughs*.
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on May 10, 2014
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA LOVE THE PRANK!!!!!!
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on May 10, 2014
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