My Poetry and the Like

My Poetry and the Like

Title's pretty self-explanatory. This ranges a lot from dark and scary to light and happy!

published on April 15, 2014not completed

The Cobblestone Path

The Cobblestone Path Blood carved out the cracks of the cobblestone.
Smoke slithered through the stars and sky.
Bang bang resonated off the walls and streets.
Pitter patter went the feet and hooves.
No one knew who they were fighting just knew they were.
Who, what, where, when, why, how didn't matter. only life.
There were no allies, there were no enemies.
Just me and my mind, but when I blinked they all just died.
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Wow, all these poems are beautiful. I live the way you described Darkness with human traits and characteristics. If I didn't know better I would have thought these poems were written by a professional. You could really become famous from writing!
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Thank you :D
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on July 03, 2014
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on July 03, 2014
whoa...................these are like story-poems :D the language is amazing, description and feels and too much amazing stuff for my brain *bang*
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haha xD and yea the last two arent really poems just descrptions
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on June 30, 2014
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on June 29, 2014
You should definitely submit this to a competition or something. Even if you don't win you will still get your work out there. That's what ive been doing :)
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on June 02, 2014
Cool! I luv them!
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on April 26, 2014
You are such an amazing writer! I cannot express in words the extents of your talents! (LOL that sounded like I was some sophisticated British socialite)
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on April 26, 2014
beautiful ^~^
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on April 21, 2014
THESE ARE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
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on April 15, 2014