Chucky the pony doll

Chucky the pony doll

Ponies think that he's just a plain old toy, but he's a killer. Every filly in ponyville decreases to 1, 10 then 100's!

published on January 20, 2013not completed

The first night with Red.

Red: And that's how ah got mah cutie-
Rarity: Excuse me, but I think Twilight is trying to concentrate, don't you think?
Red: Alright Ah'll shut mah mouth.
Rainbow Dash: Finally...
Red: But ya'll gals were too kind!
Twilight: Here's our campsite, girls.
Red: Already? Wow that was mighty quick!
Spike: Yep, it was.
Twilight: Um.. Red, do you know how to make a campfire?
Red: Of course I can, I did this everyday!  
Twilight: Rainbow Dash get some st-
Red: Mah Tail is on fire! AHHHHHH!
Pinkie Pie: Oooh, pretty flames!
Spike: *Pours water on Red's tail.
Red: Whew, that was close, I thought my whole tail is going to fall off.
Rainbow Dash: I had enough today, i'm going to sleep!
Red: But you didn't eat anything, are you okay?
Rainbow Dash: I'm okay, alright? Just let me be, please!
Pinkie pie: Aw don't worry, she's a bit grumpy, she'll lighten up!
Applejack: Just sit until, supper's ready.
Fluttershy: Here's the sticks you wanted, Twilight.
Late at night, Applejack gazed at the stars.
Red walked up to Applejack and looked away when she looked back.
Red: Do you mind if I sit here?
Applejack: No, not at all.
Red: Ah miss my children and my wife, Ah'm going live mah life to the fullest, even though,  Ah have 'bout some days left.
Applejack: I know ah'm sick already, but atleast ah'm alive.
Red: When Ah was a colt, ah was always near mah family, until ah this job, now Ah'm here lost.
Twilight takes a peek at Applejack and Red, she listened then she said.
Twilight: What's wrong?
Applejack; Oh, it's nothing Twi, just getting fresh air.
Red: You should rest, or you'll be tired, gal.
Twilight nods her head and went back to sleep. Red smiled at Twilight and turned away from Applejack, he rubbed his arm and said,
Red: Am Ah a nuisance because ever since I came wih ya'll, everypony was glum and... grumpy.
Applejack: Ah bet it's not you, it's the long journey we had.
now let's get to bed shall we?
Red: Yes, it is mighty late!
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Omg I love the end. So cute!!!
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on December 31, 2013
Vary well done. Plz hurry with the chapter 17.:-B
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on August 06, 2013
when are you making 17th chapter im dying to read the rest
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on July 12, 2013
Very, very, VERY intresting story... to be exact IT'S AWESOME
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on July 07, 2013
Omg!!!! chapter 16 was great. Can't wait until 17.
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on July 04, 2013
oh wow!!! thats um intresting...
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on June 20, 2013
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on June 17, 2013
i cant believe hat happened to the others on chapter 16!
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on June 16, 2013
aw shucks!
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on May 19, 2013
your story should bea book and be published
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on May 19, 2013
Omg I love this series. I know you probably here this a lot but you are the best pony story writer ever!!!!
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on May 18, 2013
Cool :D
Sorry Spike, I read your 13th chapter a couple of days ago, but I forgot to comment!
Anyway, great! It hooked me in :)
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on April 26, 2013
Awesome! Please continue Spike! :D
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on April 19, 2013
Ikr???
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on April 19, 2013
Awesome story!!:)
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on April 19, 2013
You are a fantastic writer Spike!!!!
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on April 18, 2013
P.s: The buffalo are twins. :)
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on April 17, 2013
I'm sorry for calling you an moron. :/
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on April 12, 2013
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on March 27, 2013
Sorry Spike....I didn't relize how mean that was.....:( forgive me?
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on March 27, 2013
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on March 26, 2013
Data good....wanna go 2 my page?
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on March 26, 2013
He's not. :)
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on March 26, 2013
Hope Red doesnt get possessed again....
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on March 26, 2013
um... let's talk, on my page. :)
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on March 25, 2013
U should!! I would want to see those movies!!!
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on March 25, 2013
I know, my mom says to become a storybook writer but I wanted to become an writer in movies along with Actress and producer and director!!!!
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on March 25, 2013
Lol take ur time!! U r an amazing author!!
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on March 25, 2013
too much pressure!!!
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on March 25, 2013
okay!!!!
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on March 25, 2013
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