Chucky the pony doll

Chucky the pony doll

Ponies think that he's just a plain old toy, but he's a killer. Every filly in ponyville decreases to 1, 10 then 100's!

published on January 20, 2013not completed

The creepy old stallion

Willis: Hey Ben, what us to walk you home?  
Ben: No thank you, but thanks anyway.

Ben began to galloped home, then he seen a creepy old stallion talking to a mare, these were his words:
You're future is very clear,
In your future, your going to struggle every day with 3 foals,
But your marriage was happy and long-lasting,
Your job is successful,
and every pony looks up to you.

The mare continued her way after the fortune was told.

Ben walked up to the old stallion he had a brown hoody on and looked like an old higue.
Old stallion: Can I help you?
Ben: Um.. Err.. no! Wait I mean yes. But don't hurt me!
Old Stallion: * Walks past Ben*
Ben: What's wrong?
Old Stallion: He... can't be!
Ben: What are you talking about?
Old stallion: *takes off hood* Chucky... Why do you live now? Curse you by our heavenly god!
Ben: That wanted sign with that pony on it, it compares to my dreams!
Old Stallion: ever since 1967, My Great-grandfather made this doll, a doll that is made for me. One day as I was a making a brew... he fell into my brew and was never seen again until a dark foggy night he attacked our citizens of ponyville. His eyes stood for  evilness and his life of being a doll vanished. Now every single pony disappears by such a monster!
Ben: So he's real?
Old stallion: Yes, but there is one solution to our problem, The crystal black stone!
Ben: Who is going to find it?
Old Stallion: The six share of our ponies that saved our country, The elements of Harmony!
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Omg I love the end. So cute!!!
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on December 31, 2013
Vary well done. Plz hurry with the chapter 17.:-B
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on August 06, 2013
when are you making 17th chapter im dying to read the rest
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on July 12, 2013
Very, very, VERY intresting story... to be exact IT'S AWESOME
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on July 07, 2013
Omg!!!! chapter 16 was great. Can't wait until 17.
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on July 04, 2013
oh wow!!! thats um intresting...
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on June 20, 2013
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on June 17, 2013
i cant believe hat happened to the others on chapter 16!
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on June 16, 2013
aw shucks!
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on May 19, 2013
your story should bea book and be published
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on May 19, 2013
Omg I love this series. I know you probably here this a lot but you are the best pony story writer ever!!!!
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on May 18, 2013
Cool :D
Sorry Spike, I read your 13th chapter a couple of days ago, but I forgot to comment!
Anyway, great! It hooked me in :)
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on April 26, 2013
Awesome! Please continue Spike! :D
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on April 19, 2013
Ikr???
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on April 19, 2013
Awesome story!!:)
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on April 19, 2013
You are a fantastic writer Spike!!!!
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on April 18, 2013
P.s: The buffalo are twins. :)
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on April 17, 2013
I'm sorry for calling you an moron. :/
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on April 12, 2013
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on March 27, 2013
Sorry Spike....I didn't relize how mean that was.....:( forgive me?
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on March 27, 2013
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on March 26, 2013
Data good....wanna go 2 my page?
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on March 26, 2013
He's not. :)
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on March 26, 2013
Hope Red doesnt get possessed again....
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on March 26, 2013
um... let's talk, on my page. :)
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on March 25, 2013
U should!! I would want to see those movies!!!
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on March 25, 2013
I know, my mom says to become a storybook writer but I wanted to become an writer in movies along with Actress and producer and director!!!!
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on March 25, 2013
Lol take ur time!! U r an amazing author!!
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on March 25, 2013
too much pressure!!!
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on March 25, 2013
okay!!!!
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on March 25, 2013
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