Chucky the pony doll

Chucky the pony doll

Ponies think that he's just a plain old toy, but he's a killer. Every filly in ponyville decreases to 1, 10 then 100's!

published on January 20, 2013not completed

War pt 1

Twilight: *Taps on Applejack* *Whispers* Hey Applejack! psst! Wake up!
Applejack: what is it Twilight? It's early in the darn morning...
Twilight: I went and found this unknown creature in the woods and he's after me with his men...
Applejack: Ya did what?!Why Twilight? Why do ya put yourself in danger?
Twilight: I don't know....
Applejack: Twilight, i'm disappointed...
Twilight: I know i'm  sorry...
Rainbow Dash: Wha- what happened?
Twilight: I'll explain later..

Applejack: *Takes out Gun*
Rainbow Dash: Okay Applejack...WHAT'S WITH THE GUN?!
Twilight: Shush! I think I hear them!

Pony 1: Come on ya Unicorn!
Pony 2: We aren't going to hurt ya...
Pony 2: *yells* Helloooooooooo!
Pony 1: *Hits pony's head* Ya a idiot...Ya giving me a headache...
Pony 2: Sorry
Pony 1: Now..I'm calling out for her...You look.
Pony 2: Gotcha sir!

Twilight: I go to the shed...You hide.
Rainbow Dash: With those crazy ponies looking for you?!
Applejack: Yeah, I agree with Rainbow...You can't do that! Since I got the weapon I'll go up...Trust me Twilight.
Rainbow and Twilight hid in the bushes briefly after Applejack left.
Rainbow Dash: Well, That was stupid...Why would you do that? Are you out of your mind?! W-W...
Twilight: I did it for a reason...I'm risking my life to save every pony...and if you feel that i'm doing the wrong thing...Then leave.
Rainbow Dash: *Reach out for candle and Matches* You're right...Come on Twilight, we're going.
Twilight: Wait...where is Spike and the rest of the gang?
Rainbow Dash: Sh*t! Those idiots took them!
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Omg I love the end. So cute!!!
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on December 31, 2013
Vary well done. Plz hurry with the chapter 17.:-B
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on August 06, 2013
when are you making 17th chapter im dying to read the rest
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on July 12, 2013
Very, very, VERY intresting story... to be exact IT'S AWESOME
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on July 07, 2013
Omg!!!! chapter 16 was great. Can't wait until 17.
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on July 04, 2013
oh wow!!! thats um intresting...
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on June 20, 2013
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on June 17, 2013
i cant believe hat happened to the others on chapter 16!
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on June 16, 2013
aw shucks!
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on May 19, 2013
your story should bea book and be published
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on May 19, 2013
Omg I love this series. I know you probably here this a lot but you are the best pony story writer ever!!!!
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on May 18, 2013
Cool :D
Sorry Spike, I read your 13th chapter a couple of days ago, but I forgot to comment!
Anyway, great! It hooked me in :)
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on April 26, 2013
Awesome! Please continue Spike! :D
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on April 19, 2013
Ikr???
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on April 19, 2013
Awesome story!!:)
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on April 19, 2013
You are a fantastic writer Spike!!!!
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on April 18, 2013
P.s: The buffalo are twins. :)
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on April 17, 2013
I'm sorry for calling you an moron. :/
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on April 12, 2013
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on March 27, 2013
Sorry Spike....I didn't relize how mean that was.....:( forgive me?
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on March 27, 2013
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on March 26, 2013
Data good....wanna go 2 my page?
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on March 26, 2013
He's not. :)
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on March 26, 2013
Hope Red doesnt get possessed again....
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on March 26, 2013
um... let's talk, on my page. :)
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on March 25, 2013
U should!! I would want to see those movies!!!
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on March 25, 2013
I know, my mom says to become a storybook writer but I wanted to become an writer in movies along with Actress and producer and director!!!!
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on March 25, 2013
Lol take ur time!! U r an amazing author!!
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on March 25, 2013
too much pressure!!!
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on March 25, 2013
okay!!!!
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on March 25, 2013
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