Chucky the pony doll

Chucky the pony doll

Ponies think that he's just a plain old toy, but he's a killer. Every filly in ponyville decreases to 1, 10 then 100's!

published on January 20, 2013not completed

The shed

The gang continued to walk until they saw an Shed.
The shed looked old and childish but was also bloody and misty.
Spike: heh, heh.... Okay, let's go...NOW! Fluttershy shook in fright.   We need to explore it first! Said Twilight in a whisper.
Rainbow Dash: *Opens door*
In the shed was demonish
Some elder and weak ponies were there, HUNDREDS.

1st pony: Push the wheel around boys, the master will be home soon!!!
2nd pony: *Faints*
3rd pony: *sweats* Just another pull, we can't let him see this, WE CAN'T!
4th pony: But we can't it's too difficult....the Ponies! They die! Some ponies wish to be alive and free off the chains but in the nasty way we live then and now, they're not here!!!
1st: This is not how we live but we are called slaves! We need to work..together!

The ponies were bloody and sweaty making steal or sawing wood, non-stop.
The fainted Ponies were always closed in a room called Deposition room which were eaten by the Master...the beast.

Red: *Begins to turn away* A-ah can't do it! Ah want to go home!
Twilight: Wait Red, COME BACK!
Twilight's voice echoed the shed and all the ponies stopped.
5th pony: *in British accent* Who is that?!
Spike pushed Twilight forward as Rarity was moving her hoof in the Go-on Position.
Twilight: *Gulps I'm here to save you, do you know where the Master at?
4th pony: We'll tell you, if you free us!
Twilight: I-I can't do this! Only the Master can!
Spike: *Whispers* Here, see if this works!
Spike gave Twilight the Black crystal stone and as Twilight rose it the chains began to break apart.
The ponies couldn't Believe their eyes! A free back, legs and life as well.
A little colt stepped up and said
Little colt: Master is stealing more ponies and he's gonna kill us all if he finds out we stopped working automatically!
Twilight: Hurry!!!! GO!!!! hurry up before he returns.
The crowd of ponies cheered and escaped out the shed room.
Come on guys, let's go before he finds us, we'll return tomorrow.
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Omg I love the end. So cute!!!
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on December 31, 2013
Vary well done. Plz hurry with the chapter 17.:-B
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on August 06, 2013
when are you making 17th chapter im dying to read the rest
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on July 12, 2013
Very, very, VERY intresting story... to be exact IT'S AWESOME
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on July 07, 2013
Omg!!!! chapter 16 was great. Can't wait until 17.
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on July 04, 2013
oh wow!!! thats um intresting...
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on June 20, 2013
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on June 17, 2013
i cant believe hat happened to the others on chapter 16!
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on June 16, 2013
aw shucks!
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on May 19, 2013
your story should bea book and be published
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on May 19, 2013
Omg I love this series. I know you probably here this a lot but you are the best pony story writer ever!!!!
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on May 18, 2013
Cool :D
Sorry Spike, I read your 13th chapter a couple of days ago, but I forgot to comment!
Anyway, great! It hooked me in :)
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on April 26, 2013
Awesome! Please continue Spike! :D
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on April 19, 2013
Ikr???
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on April 19, 2013
Awesome story!!:)
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on April 19, 2013
You are a fantastic writer Spike!!!!
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on April 18, 2013
P.s: The buffalo are twins. :)
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on April 17, 2013
I'm sorry for calling you an moron. :/
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on April 12, 2013
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on March 27, 2013
Sorry Spike....I didn't relize how mean that was.....:( forgive me?
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on March 27, 2013
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on March 26, 2013
Data good....wanna go 2 my page?
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on March 26, 2013
He's not. :)
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on March 26, 2013
Hope Red doesnt get possessed again....
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on March 26, 2013
um... let's talk, on my page. :)
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on March 25, 2013
U should!! I would want to see those movies!!!
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on March 25, 2013
I know, my mom says to become a storybook writer but I wanted to become an writer in movies along with Actress and producer and director!!!!
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on March 25, 2013
Lol take ur time!! U r an amazing author!!
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on March 25, 2013
too much pressure!!!
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on March 25, 2013
okay!!!!
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on March 25, 2013
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