Chucky the pony doll

Chucky the pony doll

Ponies think that he's just a plain old toy, but he's a killer. Every filly in ponyville decreases to 1, 10 then 100's!

published on January 20, 2013not completed

The possession

Red slowly walked but he accidently stepped on Twilight.
Twilight: Red! What are you doing!!!
Red: Nothin' Twi my dear, nothin isn't wrong and Ah can prove it.
Twilight: What is that shiny thing in your bag?!
Red: None of you're business Twi, This is an precious present for my family!
Twilight awoken the rest of the ponies.
Rainbow Dash: WHAT WAS THAT! NO ONE GOES NEAR TWILIGHT!!!
Pinkie pie: Huh?
Applejack: What in tardnation is goin' on?
Red: Twilight... stop the nonsense! I found it first!!
Red stepped back and trip over an tree stump and the information was revealed.
Twilight: This is the Black crystal stone!!! Where did you find it?
Red all of a sudden grew green possesed eyes and he grabbed back the crystal stone.
Red: MINE!!!!
Red couldn't controll hiself. Everyone tried to stop him but he wouldn't let go. His possession continued.
Twilight: Red! Calm down!
Red turned back to normal letting the stone go.
Red: ah'm sorry.... forgive mah selfish behavior... Twilight.
Red went to the corner and began to cry.
Applejack looked at Twilight and said...
Applejack: Red is just depressed. Go back to sleep Twilight.
Twilight: I shouldn't had invited him here, he's getting in the way.
Applejack: Don't worry Twilight just rest I got him.
Twilight looked back and headed back to sleep. Applejack patted Red's back and said
Applejack: I know how you feel Red, it had been a long time ever since you seen them and it's hard.
Applejack: Grannny Smith always told me to follow the Rainbow and what you find there is destiny.
Red: Thank ya for your time.
Applejack put the covers over Red and kissed him on his cheek and smiled.
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Omg I love the end. So cute!!!
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on December 31, 2013
Vary well done. Plz hurry with the chapter 17.:-B
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on August 06, 2013
when are you making 17th chapter im dying to read the rest
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on July 12, 2013
Very, very, VERY intresting story... to be exact IT'S AWESOME
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on July 07, 2013
Omg!!!! chapter 16 was great. Can't wait until 17.
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on July 04, 2013
oh wow!!! thats um intresting...
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on June 20, 2013
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on June 17, 2013
i cant believe hat happened to the others on chapter 16!
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on June 16, 2013
aw shucks!
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on May 19, 2013
your story should bea book and be published
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on May 19, 2013
Omg I love this series. I know you probably here this a lot but you are the best pony story writer ever!!!!
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on May 18, 2013
Cool :D
Sorry Spike, I read your 13th chapter a couple of days ago, but I forgot to comment!
Anyway, great! It hooked me in :)
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on April 26, 2013
Awesome! Please continue Spike! :D
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on April 19, 2013
Ikr???
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on April 19, 2013
Awesome story!!:)
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on April 19, 2013
You are a fantastic writer Spike!!!!
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on April 18, 2013
P.s: The buffalo are twins. :)
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on April 17, 2013
I'm sorry for calling you an moron. :/
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on April 12, 2013
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on March 27, 2013
Sorry Spike....I didn't relize how mean that was.....:( forgive me?
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on March 27, 2013
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on March 26, 2013
Data good....wanna go 2 my page?
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on March 26, 2013
He's not. :)
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on March 26, 2013
Hope Red doesnt get possessed again....
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on March 26, 2013
um... let's talk, on my page. :)
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on March 25, 2013
U should!! I would want to see those movies!!!
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on March 25, 2013
I know, my mom says to become a storybook writer but I wanted to become an writer in movies along with Actress and producer and director!!!!
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on March 25, 2013
Lol take ur time!! U r an amazing author!!
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on March 25, 2013
too much pressure!!!
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on March 25, 2013
okay!!!!
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on March 25, 2013
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