Wolves Of The Ravine (abandoned)

Wolves Of The Ravine (abandoned)

Ferone doesn't know where he belongs. He doesn't know where he is. Or even what he is. But his whole life changes when he comes across the wolves of the ravine. Can outsider Ferone save an entire pack from peril?

published on February 26, 2014not completed

Chapter 6

"Marigold!" Ferone whispered, the small white dog turned and gave him a smile, her black lips were the same shape as he usually had seen, her eyes were as bright as they usually were and her fur was the exact same fluff level as it usually was. But something felt odd as he looked at her, had she come to visit him? Without Alpha finding her?

The expression in her eyes was hollow, not with the frequent motherly love she would look at him. Ferone shivered, a haunting shiver crept up his spine. Suddenly Marigold's face distorted, Ferone shrieked and jumped back, he turned to run towards where Dremre was. Ferone dared to look back, Marigold's tiny eyes had narrowed into slits, her snout grew and her pelt was now tainted a glistening dark grey, like a nightmare.

And then everything was white.

"Wake up!" Dremre's call boomed in his ears. Ferone tried not to show his fear and surprise, which fortunately he didn't. But he was surprised when he saw Tyun resting on the other side of the small den, keeping his cool and patiently waiting for Ferone.

"He sleeps there?" Ferone yelped, startled.

"Didn't you notice?" Dremre said flatly. Ferone shook his head and glared at Tyun.

"Why the mean face?" Tyun asked calmly, un-battered by Ferone's rudeness.

Ferone curled his lip, he did not bother to answer, because he was stuck in this dreaded place. "When can we have food?" He asked instead, trying not to sound like he was pleading.

Tyun eyed him casually like Alpha had done. "After training." Tyun informed him. "You're plump and pampered, we cannot let you be like that." Ferone bristled at his sarcastic 'accent'.

Dremre nosed him out before he could complain, he could still feel hatred burning in his fur as Eison glared at him miserably in a shadowed den. But strangely he also felt a pair of friendly eyes rest on him, Ferone turned to see a brown wolf, his fur still fluffed up due to his youth- he looked to be about the same age as Ferone.

"Hello." The wolf said, his paws shifting restlessly. "W-what's your name?"

"I'm Ferone." He replied gloomily.

But the wolf had already spoken before Ferone could catch up with Tyun. "I'm Brincel!" The wolf introduced himself happily.

Ferone guessed there was a wolf, out of the whole pack, that had accepted him.
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Another chapter! :D
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That sounds like something Ember and Blaze would do .3.
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Ooh you changed your username :3
It's pretty!
Haha thanks for the comment too.
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Lol, thanks!
And no worries ^.^
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on May 27, 2016
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on May 27, 2016
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on May 25, 2016
This reminds me of the book series Wolves of the Beyond
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Yes, I've read a bit of that series :3
Don't worry, Wolves of the Ravine will be much different
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on May 11, 2016
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on May 11, 2016
Also, if you need any OC's, I'm happy to create some for you.
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I'd love some, especially for the Parnes :3
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Sure! No problem ^.^ I'll PM them to you.
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on April 19, 2016
I love the cover! Sorry I haven't commented, I'm unfortunately not on Qfeast as much as I used to be.
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Crimson! You're back ^_^
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Well, I've always been here, I just don't go on Qfeast as much ^.^'
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on April 20, 2016
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on April 19, 2016
Does your best friend get to be a wolf too? ;D
Huehuehue.
I liek da story so far. ;3
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Name: Makkie
Gender: female
Look: *secret*
Size: *secret*
Species: (Wolf or Dog) wolf See More
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YAY YOU GAVE ME A GOOD NAME! <3 ILY BEST FRAND
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on April 16, 2016
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on April 16, 2016
Yes yes :3
Just sign the form ~~
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I'm too lazy! ;-;
Do it for me? :3
Create my wolf however you please!! ;D
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on April 07, 2016
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on April 06, 2016
O_O

This is so good! I need more!
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Thank you! More coming soon! :p
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@Mooncloud16 I've added more ^_^
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on April 04, 2016
Yay! ^_^
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on March 31, 2016
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on March 31, 2016
Thanks Crimson, it's nice to have a usual commentor on the story. :)
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on May 13, 2014
AWESOME!
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on May 13, 2014
Its fine tho ^_^
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on April 29, 2014
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Oh my god I am so dumb and I am so sorryyy.
I kept on thinking of moons that I got wowzo and stuffed it up. I'll be fixing it :">
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on April 29, 2014
Still I LOVE the story ^_^
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on April 21, 2014
Sorry I am confuzzled...So is Eclipse Crescent or is Crescent different entirely? If the first one I don't mind if you change Eclipse's name to Crescent
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on April 21, 2014
Sure and no problem ^_^
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on April 21, 2014
Perfect Crimson! So you're okay with me paring, controlling and stuff like that? Well I guess rocks and cakes explain it all. Many thanks!
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on April 21, 2014
Name: Eclipse
Gender: female
Look: Sleek Light grey fur that shines silver in the moonlight
size: average I guess..I honestly don't mind
Species: Wolf See More
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on April 19, 2014
Oh I will make one then
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on April 19, 2014
Oh my god! Thanks guys!
I really wanna see OC sign ups!
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on April 19, 2014
I love the story so far.
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on April 19, 2014
Thanks!
Do you want to create an oc for the story? Cause I need a medicine wolf.
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on April 19, 2014
love it
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on April 19, 2014