Wolves Of The Ravine (abandoned)

Wolves Of The Ravine (abandoned)

Ferone doesn't know where he belongs. He doesn't know where he is. Or even what he is. But his whole life changes when he comes across the wolves of the ravine. Can outsider Ferone save an entire pack from peril?

published on February 26, 2014not completed

Chapter 7

Brincel cast him a grin but before he could speak, Tyun interrupted them. "Ferone, you can 'pup' around later, now follow me." Ferone cast an apologetic glance at Brincel before he chasing after Tyun.

"I think your fight with that pathetic Eison had already proven your battle skills, so I guess we'll hunt," Tyun said.

Ferone had a pang of sympathy for Eison, he had to admit luck saved him, not skill. "How can we find a single mouse in this wretched place?!" He retorted. Tyun didn't batter an eyelash at his attitude.

"Then we go up into the grass." Tyun said. Ferone glanced up, to his shock the height was enormously great.

"We're not going all the way up there are we?" Ferone mumbled. Tyun gave him a look of disapproval.

"I knew everything from up there have no courage and effort." He sneered, Ferone growled and held his ground.

"I am not a coward!" Ferone retorted.

Tyun gave him a challenging look. "Then prove it." He muttered.

Ferone was glad to have his paws on ground the whole way, the rocky slope led to the top. Ferone felt as if he spent the whole morning climbing up to a ridiculous reason. His fur was drenched by heat the time he felt his paws touch grass, giving him a relieving feel.

Tyun had given him no mercy or time to rest. "Now crouch." He ordered urgently. Ferone got off his slumping mode and crouched.

"You crouch like a cowardly lower dog." Tyun snickered. "You need to move your paws and keep your tail down, and also stretch your body longer." Ferone obeyed, furrowing his eyebrow in anger as he struggled to get in the right position.

"Satisfying," Tyun said. "Now walk forward without making a noise." Ferone found it impossible as he spoke. Easier said than done, he thought in annoyance, he took a step forward, only to collapse, earning a sneer from Tyun.

Ferone retried a few times before managing to pounce perfectly. Finally, Tyun seemed impressed. "Not bad." He barked, before menacingly adding. "For a pup." Ferone tolerated his teasing and waited for Tyun's next instructions.

"Now try sniffing." Tyun commanded. Ferone couldn't smell anything. He had never thought of sniffing before, why could such a simple thing be so difficult? He had thought too soon, then a delicious aroma crept into his nose. It smelt of dirt along with meat. "What do you smell?" Tyun questioned.

"I smell dirt and meat." Ferone mumbled while drooling, seeing Tyun raise an eyebrow, he quickly guessed. "Rabbit."

Tyun seemed slightly satisfied. "Now which-" He began, but quickly froze. Ferone attempted to smell too. An unbelievably strong scent filled his nose, he let out a gruesome growl at the disgusting smell. Tyun didn't waste time.

"Quick, we need to get back and warn the other wolves." He swiftly growled, Tyun had already pushed him and they were both speeding in fear.

Ferone had already knew that the foul scent meant something bad, and fear was crawling over his skin.
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Another chapter! :D
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That sounds like something Ember and Blaze would do .3.
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Ooh you changed your username :3
It's pretty!
Haha thanks for the comment too.
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Lol, thanks!
And no worries ^.^
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on May 27, 2016
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on May 25, 2016
This reminds me of the book series Wolves of the Beyond
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Yes, I've read a bit of that series :3
Don't worry, Wolves of the Ravine will be much different
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on May 11, 2016
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on May 11, 2016
Also, if you need any OC's, I'm happy to create some for you.
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I'd love some, especially for the Parnes :3
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Sure! No problem ^.^ I'll PM them to you.
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on April 19, 2016
I love the cover! Sorry I haven't commented, I'm unfortunately not on Qfeast as much as I used to be.
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Crimson! You're back ^_^
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Well, I've always been here, I just don't go on Qfeast as much ^.^'
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on April 20, 2016
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on April 19, 2016
Does your best friend get to be a wolf too? ;D
Huehuehue.
I liek da story so far. ;3
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Name: Makkie
Gender: female
Look: *secret*
Size: *secret*
Species: (Wolf or Dog) wolf See More
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YAY YOU GAVE ME A GOOD NAME! <3 ILY BEST FRAND
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on April 16, 2016
Yes yes :3
Just sign the form ~~
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I'm too lazy! ;-;
Do it for me? :3
Create my wolf however you please!! ;D
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on April 07, 2016
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on April 06, 2016
O_O

This is so good! I need more!
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Thank you! More coming soon! :p
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@Mooncloud16 I've added more ^_^
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on April 04, 2016
Yay! ^_^
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on March 31, 2016
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on March 31, 2016
Thanks Crimson, it's nice to have a usual commentor on the story. :)
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on May 13, 2014
AWESOME!
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on May 13, 2014
Its fine tho ^_^
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on April 29, 2014
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Oh my god I am so dumb and I am so sorryyy.
I kept on thinking of moons that I got wowzo and stuffed it up. I'll be fixing it :">
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on April 29, 2014
Still I LOVE the story ^_^
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on April 21, 2014
Sorry I am confuzzled...So is Eclipse Crescent or is Crescent different entirely? If the first one I don't mind if you change Eclipse's name to Crescent
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on April 21, 2014
Sure and no problem ^_^
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on April 21, 2014
Perfect Crimson! So you're okay with me paring, controlling and stuff like that? Well I guess rocks and cakes explain it all. Many thanks!
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on April 21, 2014
Name: Eclipse
Gender: female
Look: Sleek Light grey fur that shines silver in the moonlight
size: average I guess..I honestly don't mind
Species: Wolf See More
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on April 19, 2014
Oh I will make one then
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on April 19, 2014
Oh my god! Thanks guys!
I really wanna see OC sign ups!
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on April 19, 2014
I love the story so far.
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on April 19, 2014
Thanks!
Do you want to create an oc for the story? Cause I need a medicine wolf.
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on April 19, 2014
love it
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