Wolves Of The Ravine (abandoned)

Wolves Of The Ravine (abandoned)

Ferone doesn't know where he belongs. He doesn't know where he is. Or even what he is. But his whole life changes when he comes across the wolves of the ravine. Can outsider Ferone save an entire pack from peril?

published on February 26, 2014not completed

Chapter 14

"What business do you have here?" Rift growled, her eyes were steady and her stance was composed. Ferone's jaw dropped open, he had enough common sense to know that the Parnes were probably up to no good.

Starling exchanged a confused and nervous glance with Ferone, she had remembered him. But a larger figure overshadowed her.

The wolf next to Starling stepped forward, he had ruffled grey fur and slanted hazel eyes; which bore down on Ferone. "You are one of the East Paws, are you?" He asked, menace edged his voice.

Rift bunched her muscles and kept her eyes narrowed, but did not show any sign of resignment. "Answer my question, what business do you have here?"

The wolf prodded Starling, who shifted her paws uncomfortably. "Why don't you explain, Starling?" He snorted. Ferone's neck fur ruffled, that sounded more like a command, and it probably was.

"I- Alpha says we're going to take back rightful land." Starling stammered, her voice was full of uncertainty. Ferone felt sympathy for the she-wolf, but anger and surprise as well.

Rightful land? Starling could not have meant the new piece of territory they were standing on.

"You heard that, didn't you? East sparrows." The wolf growled vainfully.

"Is that a challenge? You must be wanting to claim this territory you lost your fur over." Rift guessed, her green eyes glinted, but Ferone could not tell what she was thinking.

"Yes, you're smarter than you look." The wolf answered, his claws flexed with annoyance. "Next sun high, we will set our markers here. You can tell that cowardly Alpha of yours that we can all fight tooth and claw; that is - if you show up." He dismissed Rift and Ferone with a flick of his tail, leaving them silent as he walked away.

Starling's face drooped with fear. "Star-" Ferone almost called, but the she-wolf turned away and hurried after the bigger wolf.

Thankfully, Rift hadn't heard him. "Ferone, you know what that means." She whispered.

Ferone had clearly understood the message, he felt angry that the Parnes had so casually challenged them over the territory which the omega- no a wolf died over, yet he couldn't think of fighting Starling or hurting her friends, let alone shed blood. "Rift, we can't!"

Rift's eyes betrayed no emotion. "This is a decision Alpha will make, we follow his orders, wherever we like it or not."

Ferone's stomach felt hollow with apprehension. Rift touched the tip of her tail on his shoulder, as if she were reassuring him. "We're going back," she whispered. "We need Alpha's word."
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Another chapter! :D
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That sounds like something Ember and Blaze would do .3.
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Ooh you changed your username :3
It's pretty!
Haha thanks for the comment too.
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Lol, thanks!
And no worries ^.^
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on May 27, 2016
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on May 27, 2016
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on May 25, 2016
This reminds me of the book series Wolves of the Beyond
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Yes, I've read a bit of that series :3
Don't worry, Wolves of the Ravine will be much different
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on May 11, 2016
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on May 11, 2016
Also, if you need any OC's, I'm happy to create some for you.
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I'd love some, especially for the Parnes :3
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Sure! No problem ^.^ I'll PM them to you.
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on April 19, 2016
I love the cover! Sorry I haven't commented, I'm unfortunately not on Qfeast as much as I used to be.
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Crimson! You're back ^_^
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Well, I've always been here, I just don't go on Qfeast as much ^.^'
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on April 20, 2016
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on April 19, 2016
Does your best friend get to be a wolf too? ;D
Huehuehue.
I liek da story so far. ;3
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Name: Makkie
Gender: female
Look: *secret*
Size: *secret*
Species: (Wolf or Dog) wolf See More
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YAY YOU GAVE ME A GOOD NAME! <3 ILY BEST FRAND
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on April 16, 2016
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on April 16, 2016
Yes yes :3
Just sign the form ~~
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I'm too lazy! ;-;
Do it for me? :3
Create my wolf however you please!! ;D
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on April 07, 2016
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on April 06, 2016
O_O

This is so good! I need more!
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Thank you! More coming soon! :p
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@Mooncloud16 I've added more ^_^
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on April 04, 2016
Yay! ^_^
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on March 31, 2016
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on March 31, 2016
Thanks Crimson, it's nice to have a usual commentor on the story. :)
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on May 13, 2014
AWESOME!
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on May 13, 2014
Its fine tho ^_^
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on April 29, 2014
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Oh my god I am so dumb and I am so sorryyy.
I kept on thinking of moons that I got wowzo and stuffed it up. I'll be fixing it :">
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on April 29, 2014
Still I LOVE the story ^_^
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on April 21, 2014
Sorry I am confuzzled...So is Eclipse Crescent or is Crescent different entirely? If the first one I don't mind if you change Eclipse's name to Crescent
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on April 21, 2014
Sure and no problem ^_^
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on April 21, 2014
Perfect Crimson! So you're okay with me paring, controlling and stuff like that? Well I guess rocks and cakes explain it all. Many thanks!
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on April 21, 2014
Name: Eclipse
Gender: female
Look: Sleek Light grey fur that shines silver in the moonlight
size: average I guess..I honestly don't mind
Species: Wolf See More
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on April 19, 2014
Oh I will make one then
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on April 19, 2014
Oh my god! Thanks guys!
I really wanna see OC sign ups!
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on April 19, 2014
I love the story so far.
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on April 19, 2014
Thanks!
Do you want to create an oc for the story? Cause I need a medicine wolf.
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on April 19, 2014
love it
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on April 19, 2014