Wolves Of The Ravine (abandoned)

Wolves Of The Ravine (abandoned)

Ferone doesn't know where he belongs. He doesn't know where he is. Or even what he is. But his whole life changes when he comes across the wolves of the ravine. Can outsider Ferone save an entire pack from peril?

published on February 26, 2014not completed

Chapter 13

Ferone had done nothing but training and errands for the past few sunturns. He didn't even get to explore more of the territory with Brincel.

Ferone made his way to the third den, Tyun had asked him to deliver what seemed like a bundle of green and yellow to Oryan; the only medicine wolf in the pack. The third den was sheltered by an overhang of moss and ivy and was located near the heart of the camp.

"Excuse me." Ferone awkwardly called as he pushed through the entrance.

A white she-wolf with extraordinary silver splotches stirred and turned to face him, her eyes were amber and her muzzle had turned slightly grey by age, Ferone guesses she was Oryan."Oh hello, you're that wolf that joined a few sunturns ago." She coldly greeted. "Thank you for the marigold, I was looking for that."

A spark hit Ferone, he had almost forgotten about Marigold; the small dog who lovingly looked over him. Ferone shook his head, he was a ravine wolf now, Marigold was better off believing that he went to the place she called heaven. "Is there anything else you want me to do?" Ferone offered, dismissing the thought.

"Tell that fool Tyun that I need some cobwebs, they should be all over the new bit of territory." Oryan barked, Ferone thought he saw a hint of amusement in her eyes.

"Okay, I'll go do that." Ferone reassured, flicking his tail in farewell before exiting the den.

Ferone noticed Tyun resting by Dremre, the she-wolf's belly had grown slightly bigger. "Tyun, Oryan wants some cobwebs." He called.

"Sorry Ferone, but I need to go hunting with Eclipse later, you can take someone else with you." Tyun growled while yawning, Ferone refrained from letting himself snort, he decided to take Brincel with him.

Ferone checked the sixth den, Brincel wasn't there, nor was he near the prey pile or the slope. "Are you looking for something?" A familiar call made Ferone jump, he saw Rift standing behind him, her green eyes piercing into his fur.

"Oh yeah, have you seen Brincel?" Ferone awkwardly asked.

"He's already in the grasslands with Eclipse, they'll be hunting the whole day." Rift informed. "Did you need something?"

Ferone nodded. "Oryan told me to get some cobwebs, but Tyun's busy."

"I'll come with you, you haven't left since you started doing an Omega's job." Rift necessitated.

"Thanks." Ferone gratefully barked, he would've hated to go alone. The pair made their way to the narrow opening, like Brincel, Rift seemed used to the sheer heights.

"You'll get used to walking around here, the ground is actually really supportive, it can hold the weight of our paws." Rift reassured, as if she could read his thoughts.

"You mentioned something about an Omega earlier." Ferone noted, changing the topic.

"An Omega is the lowest ranked wolf, they carry out chores and errands, but we haven't had one since our last one died." Rift explained.

"How did he die?" Ferone dared to ask. He saw a shiver run down Rift's back.

"He died saving Alpha, a truly noble death." Rift sighed. "It wasn't that long ago, it was the over the new territory; the place we're going to now."

Ferone felt a slight pang of grief, despite the fact he never met the previous Omega. "Alpha, I advise you to appoint a right claw wolf soon." Ferone was surprised when he heard Eclipse's voice, he couldn't see the she-wolf anywhere around him.

"I don't need one, what's the point of having a wolf who'd die protecting another? It's still a loss." Alpha's deep growl sounded. Ferone blinked, this was like the time where he had to evacuate in the territory beneath the camp; he could hear voices from afar.

"Ferone, we're here." Rift's voice awoke Ferone from his eavesdropping. "You almost fell off too."

"Oh, sorry." Ferone mumbled in embarrassment. The new territory was the same as it was when he visited with Brincel.

"Thank the spirit wolves, there are a whole lot of cobwebs just over there." Rift barked, pointing her tail to the other side of the clearing. Ferone bounded after Rift as she made her way towards the silver sheened webs, but half-way, she stopped.

"Ferone do you smell that?" Rift hissed, her teeth bared. Ferone sniffed the air, it was the same stench as the Parnes.

"The-"

"Parnes." Rift finished. No sooner than she finished speaking, two wolves emerged from the shadows. One of them was Starling.
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Another chapter! :D
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That sounds like something Ember and Blaze would do .3.
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Ooh you changed your username :3
It's pretty!
Haha thanks for the comment too.
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Lol, thanks!
And no worries ^.^
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on May 27, 2016
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on May 25, 2016
This reminds me of the book series Wolves of the Beyond
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Yes, I've read a bit of that series :3
Don't worry, Wolves of the Ravine will be much different
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on May 11, 2016
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on May 11, 2016
Also, if you need any OC's, I'm happy to create some for you.
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I'd love some, especially for the Parnes :3
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Sure! No problem ^.^ I'll PM them to you.
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on April 19, 2016
I love the cover! Sorry I haven't commented, I'm unfortunately not on Qfeast as much as I used to be.
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Crimson! You're back ^_^
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Well, I've always been here, I just don't go on Qfeast as much ^.^'
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on April 19, 2016
Does your best friend get to be a wolf too? ;D
Huehuehue.
I liek da story so far. ;3
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Name: Makkie
Gender: female
Look: *secret*
Size: *secret*
Species: (Wolf or Dog) wolf See More
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YAY YOU GAVE ME A GOOD NAME! <3 ILY BEST FRAND
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on April 16, 2016
Yes yes :3
Just sign the form ~~
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I'm too lazy! ;-;
Do it for me? :3
Create my wolf however you please!! ;D
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on April 06, 2016
O_O

This is so good! I need more!
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Thank you! More coming soon! :p
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@Mooncloud16 I've added more ^_^
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on April 04, 2016
Yay! ^_^
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on March 31, 2016
Thanks Crimson, it's nice to have a usual commentor on the story. :)
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on May 13, 2014
AWESOME!
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on May 13, 2014
Its fine tho ^_^
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on April 29, 2014
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Oh my god I am so dumb and I am so sorryyy.
I kept on thinking of moons that I got wowzo and stuffed it up. I'll be fixing it :">
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on April 29, 2014
Still I LOVE the story ^_^
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on April 21, 2014
Sorry I am confuzzled...So is Eclipse Crescent or is Crescent different entirely? If the first one I don't mind if you change Eclipse's name to Crescent
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on April 21, 2014
Sure and no problem ^_^
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on April 21, 2014
Perfect Crimson! So you're okay with me paring, controlling and stuff like that? Well I guess rocks and cakes explain it all. Many thanks!
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on April 21, 2014
Name: Eclipse
Gender: female
Look: Sleek Light grey fur that shines silver in the moonlight
size: average I guess..I honestly don't mind
Species: Wolf See More
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on April 19, 2014
Oh I will make one then
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on April 19, 2014
Oh my god! Thanks guys!
I really wanna see OC sign ups!
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on April 19, 2014
I love the story so far.
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on April 19, 2014
Thanks!
Do you want to create an oc for the story? Cause I need a medicine wolf.
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on April 19, 2014
love it
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