Invisible

Invisible

This is a story about a girl who has never stuck out... But maybe, just maybe, with the help of a cute guy, she can change that.

published on January 08, 2013completed

Shouldn't Summer be Fun?

"Shouldn't summer be fun, or did I make that up?"  Anna asks me.

"I'm pretty sure you just made that up," I said as I refilled the guy sitting at the counters coffee.

"That's what I was thinking, because slaving away for minimum wage isn't as fun as I thought it would be," she sighed.

Once school ended, me and my mom moved in with Phil.  My mom quit her job, and I took her place as a waitress at Pete's.  I needed to start saving for college, and now that Phil gave me his old car, gas money as well.  Not that I'm complaining, I really love the car.  

Anna has been working here since she was a sophomore in high school.  She is now going into her sophomore year of college.  

Despite our differences, me and Anna got along surprisingly well.  We disagreed on practically everything, including music (she loves heavy metal, I can't stand it), and movies (her obsession with horror movies worried me, I'm more of a romantic comedy girl myself).  Our personalities were polar opposites as well. She was loud, pessimistic, and brutally honest with everyone- even complete strangers.  She was never scared to tell a customer how disgusting their eating habit were, or how horrible their shirt looked on them.  

But, she was my friend, my best friend.  
Pete's diner looked like it came straight from a movie.  Complete with black and white checkered floors, red booths, a long counter with tattered stools, and a jukebox.  

"Oh, how lovely, I have a customer.  I'll be back," Anna slung her shiny brown hair over her shoulder.  Instead of using the door that lifts up to get on the other side of the counter like normal people would do, Anna lifted herself up onto the top of the counter and slid down.

I heard Jeff, thechef, yell from the kitchen: "I can't wait till someone catches you doing that.  I am going to laugh when Pete himself fires your ass."

Anna turned, "Speaking of asses, kiss mine, Jeff."

I chuckled, they were constantly bickering.  I checked the diner once more, our only customers was the old man at the counter, and whoever Anna was serving now

"Excuse me, miss," the man at the counter asked.

"What can I do for you?"  I asked him.

"I'm ready for my check," he said.

"Alright," I ripped his check from my little booklet.  "Total is 6.50."

"Thank you," he reached for his wallet.  

Anna ducked under the counter.  "Jeff, I need a double cheeseburger, hold the mustard and lettuce," she called.

"Oh, do you now?"  He asked.

Anna groaned.  "Just make the burger."

I collected my customers money and tip, walking to the cash register to put in the money.  

"Order up!"  Jeff called.  

"That was quick," I yelled.

I heard him sigh deeply, "I have a gift."

Anna snickered.  "The gift of being a pain in the ass."

Jeff walked out from the kitchen area, the door propped open my an old menu.  "I can hear you, he said shaking his spatula.  He held the plate of food in the other.

Anna took the plate, sticking her tongue out.  

Once she was out of hearing distance, I walked to Jeff. "When are you going to ask her out?"

He wiped his hands on his apron.  "Actually, today."

I nudged him.  "Good for you, she really likes you, ya know."

"And I really like her," he smiled.  "Do you really think she'll yes?  I mean, I am older than her."

I scoffed, "By a year."

Jeff sighed, looking at Anna as she made small talk with her customer.   "I'm going to do it."

"Be sure to invite me to your wedding," I said as I walked away.

"Will do, Kase."

As I turned to take my place at the counter, I heard the familiar chime of the bell on the door.  I looked up to greet our next customer, and my heart completely stopped.  

I literally stood frozen, my heart began beating again at a dangerously fast pace.  We stood looking at each other, I would have spoken but I couldn't.  My breath hitched in my throat as I felt a wave of tears coming.  

He was standing there, right there on the other side of the counter.

Anna slipped under the counter, giving me a crazed look.  Her gaze flickered from me to him, and back.  As if she was trying to make a connection for why I was reacting the way I was.

"Kasey," she came up right beside me, her voice low.

I broke eye contact with him.

"What's wrong?"  She asked.

"It's him," I said.

"It's who, Kase?  Talk to me, what's wrong?"  Anna  put her hand protectively on my shoulder.

My chest shuddered.  "That's my dad."

* *  *  *  *  *

"Oh my God," Anna's eyes widened.

"I don't know what to do," a tear escaped.  I felt the familiar feeling of panic hit me.

"I'll tell him to leave," Anna nodded.  

"I don't know if he recognizes me," I placed a hand on my stomach.  

"He's looking at you, I think he does."

Jeff suddenly appeared on my right.  "What's wrong?  Do I need to call the cops or kick someone out?"

Anna pulled Jeff to her and whispered: "That's Kasey's dad."

"Are you sure?"  Jeff asked me.

I nodded.  "He looks exactly like this picture of him my mom had."

Suddenly, the man, my father, cleared his throat.  "Is everything okay?"

Anna shot him a look that could kill.  

He took a step away from the counter.

"I can't do this," I took a shaky breath.  "I can't.  I have to go, right now.  I need to get out of here."

Anna nodded.  "Okay, sweet heart.  Everything is going to be fine, I promise."

I made a mad dash to the counter, lifted up the door and tried to run past him- my dad.  

"Kasey?" He caught my arm.  "It's really you," I saw a tear in his eye.

"Let me go," I begged.

"Kasey.  Can we talk?  Please?"  He asked.

I shook my head. "No, no, we can't," I tried to pull away from him.

Behind me, I heard the door jingle.

"What's going on?"  A guy asked.

His voice was so familiar.

My dad let my arm go, as if suddenly realizing what was going on.  

I turned to run, and smacked straight into the guy who had spoken.

I glanced up, and for the second time my heart completely stopped.  No- it shattered.  

Lucas.

"Kasey, are you okay?"  Lucas asked.

His hair had grown a bit since the last time I saw him.  But his eyes, they brought back a billion memories I didn't need.  

Without waiting any longer, I shoved past Lucas and into the parking lot.  I dug my keys out from the pocket of my apron, and went to unlock my car.  

Please, do not follow me.  Please, God, do not let either one of them follow me.  

"Kasey!"  I heard Lucas call.

"We need to talk, Kase!"  He yelled.

I flung the car door open.  I turned to face him, "I can't do this right now, Lucas."  I saw my dad pacing inside the diner through the window.

"Kase-"

"I really can't do this, Lucas," his name felt like poison as I said it.

"Who was that guy?"  Lucas asked.

I put one foot in my car.  "My dad."

Before Lucas could respond, I was already in the car, flooring it to get as far away as possible from the to guys that had contributed to the down fall of my life.  
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It's awesome dear
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on June 07, 2016
very good... I loved it very much.
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on September 02, 2015
Omgmmmmmm i fell inlove with this story
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Aw thank you
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on October 12, 2014
OMG IT TOOK MY 40 WHOLE MINUTES TO FINISH THE STTTORRRRYYY! AMAAAZZZIIIINNNGGG!
me reading the story:
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Thanks haha
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on August 24, 2014
Thanks everybody :D
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on August 13, 2014
OMG I couldn't stop reading!! XD
I spent a good part of my morning just reading this, :D
I loved it, and you are a great writer.
Sorry for babbling....
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Don't apologize! Thank you!
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on October 12, 2014
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on August 13, 2014
SO GOOD!!
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Thank youuu
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on August 11, 2014
I love it!! This is an amazing story!!!
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Thanks :-*
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on August 01, 2014
GREAT STORY AWESOME :)
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THANK YOU
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on July 18, 2014
@Bmac99 Hey Bmac!! YOU GOT 1000 READS!!!!!!!!!!
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ARE YOU FREAKING SERIOUSSS AOSNSJSKABSOSNSJDBD OMGGGG
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Cool! I haven't read Taking Chances yet (I think) so I'll check it out!
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on July 12, 2014
aw thanks. I am almost done with the next chapter of taking chances.
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on July 12, 2014
Yep! :) I re-read it for u :)
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on July 11, 2014
(sniff) beautiful
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on July 10, 2014
Thanks :)
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on June 09, 2014
Wow! This is amazing!
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on June 09, 2014
WITH ABOUT TEN MORE READS WE CAN BUMP INVISIBLE INTO 3RD PLACE. WHO IS WITH ME?
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on May 21, 2014
Wow. There are some fan fictions, that are really long, but incredible. This is one of those. You are an amazing author.
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on May 21, 2014
Guys...this has almost 900 reads. Help me get to 1000? Recommend this to friends, get people interested! Seriously! I love you guys.
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on May 12, 2014
Taking Chances has been updated!
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on May 12, 2014
Yes! That would be so cool!!!!!! And you can refer then back to this site or my wattpad account which is BeatriceB99!!! Thank you!!!!!!
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on April 26, 2014
Okay so anyways. I'm going to start working on spreading your story now :3 sorry that I haven't started doing what I promised yet. Just been real busy. Anyways. Do you want me to create a cover for you? I mean like a lagit cover with the title and Authers name ( that would be you) ???
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on April 25, 2014
I would fall out of my chair if I was sitting in one.
LOOK AT HOW MANY READS THIS HAS!
Ugh, I love all of my fans :x
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on March 26, 2014
780 reads...wow...that is amazing you guys :))))
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on February 27, 2014
TAKING CHANCES IS NOW OFFICIALLY IN PROGRESS. TWO CHAPTERS ARE UP.
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on December 16, 2013
AND INVISIBLE IS #3 ON THE MOST POPULAR BOOKS.
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on December 14, 2013
OVER 700 READS?!? THAT IS NUTS! I LOVE YOU PEOPLE <3
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on December 14, 2013
ATTENTION: INVISIBLE SPIN-OFF ANNOUNCEMENT. THE TITLE IS GOING TO BE "TAKING CHANCES."
Summary: Maria as always been a good girl, but when she starts a relationship with the sexiest, most mysterious guy in school, she may just have to change that.
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on December 14, 2013
I HAVE OVER 15 PEOPLE WHO HAVE SAID YES TO THE SPIN OFF!!! I WILL GET TO WRITING AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. HOPEFULLY THE FIRST CHAPTER WILL BE UP BEFORE SUNDAY. IT SEEMS LIKE A LONG TIME BUT STARTING A NEW STORY TAKES LOTS OF PLANNING. I MAY BE ABLE TO START TONIGHT, WHO KNOWS? KEEP YOUR EYES PEELED FOR A SUMMARY/SNEAK PEEK OF THE BOOK ON MY WALL. LOVE YOU ALL<3 See More
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on December 10, 2013
@peace_out what are you talking about?! your stories rock!
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on December 09, 2013
I agree with @The_Brendan yes 4 spin-off!
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on December 09, 2013
yes 4 spin-off!
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on December 09, 2013
Okay peeps!
I need three more yes's on the Invisible spin-off story!!! So if you read Invisible and have already told me you want this new story, tell your friends who read Invisible! If you read Invisible and want this story, please tell me. Comment here or, message me, or post on my wall!
And I would like to thank all of my supporters again. You guys have no See More
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on December 06, 2013
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