The Train

The Train

Ghost story I wrote for English, thought I'd upload it cos I'm not gonna upload my other stories as 2 people know who I am so...

published on January 29, 2014completed

Newspaper

I froze, still processing what had happened. Mechanically, my legs started carrying me away, running in the opposite direction as fast as they could. My frozen mind faintly tried to order my legs to go back, help those people trapped in the train I couldn't see. But I was like a spooked rabbit, bolting blindly from danger, survival instincts taking charge. Breathing hard, feet pounding, I didn't dare look back. I shot out into sunlight, nearly careering into a sign in front of me, rusted with age. ABANDONED IN 1932 was clearly etched into the iron, glaring out in front of me. A faded newspaper article was framed and nailed up on a post next to it.

DOZEN INJURED IN TRAGIC TRAIN CRASH
Police are still investigating the crash of No. 26, which had left 23 injured and 14 dead. Survivors report the driver had been seen to be unsteady on his feet before driving the train and that several asked if he was quite alright.
"I blame the driver, he was drunk as a fish!" Mr Spenlow quoted our reporter.
Frank Alder, it seems, has disappeared without a trace. Most likely the conclusion will be a case of drunken driving.

My blood turned to ice. My grandmother's last name was Alder.
"Alder....."
I whipped around. There was nothing I could see. That didn't mean there was nothing to be seen. A cold finger crept down my spine. Whispers just too quiet for me to hear. Whispers from a past long gone.
"We blame Alder......"
Shadows enveloped my body. I fell through the ground and darkness filled my last thoughts.
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Hey this is really cool! You have an awesome imagination!
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on September 12, 2014
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on September 12, 2014
If you like this one, will you read my other one about the sirens? No one's read it so far and I'd like to see what people think of it
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on May 30, 2014
Thank you :) glad you were creeped out :D
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on May 30, 2014
welcome!! you really are nice so ;)
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on February 05, 2014
Aaw thanks I love reading other people's stories thanks for the encouragement :D
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on February 02, 2014
btw thank for supporting me and reading my stories too!! i wish i can read other stories you write!!
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on February 02, 2014
wow!! this is so good!! you write extremely well!! i love your writing style and descriptions (feel like i'm in the story!!) ;) your story is really good!! is it completed?? i hope you write more!!!!
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on February 02, 2014