The Train

The Train

Ghost story I wrote for English, thought I'd upload it cos I'm not gonna upload my other stories as 2 people know who I am so...

published on January 29, 2014completed

Train crash

I yelled out at the top of my voice "STOP! The track's broken! STOP!" The chugging kept on steadily getting louder. "STOP! STOP!" I screamed. The noise was loud enough to be at my side but no train came. The smell of wet steam and coal drifted to my nose. The track vibrated as if bearing the weight of a train. I felt a rush of wind, as if something had just raced past.

Time slowed down. It felt like I was moving in treacle, my bones getting heavier as I tried to run. Whispers beckoned from a past long gone. The bend ahead had a gap in the trees, a slight weakness in the green wall like something had torn through the leaves. there was a screeching of metal on metal, grinding squeal of brakes being slammed on too late. A shout rang out, panicky and desperate. A cry for help. A scraping crash as something I couldn't see hit the solid line of trees ahead. A dead silence.
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Hey this is really cool! You have an awesome imagination!
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on September 12, 2014
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on September 12, 2014
If you like this one, will you read my other one about the sirens? No one's read it so far and I'd like to see what people think of it
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on May 30, 2014
Thank you :) glad you were creeped out :D
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on May 30, 2014
welcome!! you really are nice so ;)
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on February 05, 2014
Aaw thanks I love reading other people's stories thanks for the encouragement :D
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on February 02, 2014
btw thank for supporting me and reading my stories too!! i wish i can read other stories you write!!
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on February 02, 2014
wow!! this is so good!! you write extremely well!! i love your writing style and descriptions (feel like i'm in the story!!) ;) your story is really good!! is it completed?? i hope you write more!!!!
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on February 02, 2014