When a planet from many galaxies away comes out of orbit and hits the blue moon, life starts and the Lunarians start discovering new parts of the moon. When all parts of the moon are discovered the Lunarian race thinks that life will be normal. Instead, when half of the moon disappears, they try to find out what caused it, and they might find more than they expected...
I am swimming when I look at a glowing formation and see a gem. "Moonstone?" I say but nothing happens. Then Atlantis swims over. "You think you found the moonstone?" he asks. "Yes, but it won't work" "Mighty and powerful Moonstone, help our humble selves find the other Moonstone to save and restore Fullmoon!" he shouts in a loud clear voice. The moonstone starts glowing brown. My eyes grow big. "Wow!" "Thanks, Lad." That was amazing. Brown. Could that mean that a desert is where you need to go? Oh, whatever.
But maybe with longer chapters...
And I liked how u introduced the characters at the beginning
I love your characters!