When a planet from many galaxies away comes out of orbit and hits the blue moon, life starts and the Lunarians start discovering new parts of the moon. When all parts of the moon are discovered the Lunarian race thinks that life will be normal. Instead, when half of the moon disappears, they try to find out what caused it, and they might find more than they expected...
"How long will this take?!" "Not long. We have the soldiers ready and only need to tame the Blazing Steeds now." said Aidan. "I want to attack now before the Savior comes!" "I am working as fast a s a detective can!" Ugh. Aidan is so protective of himself. But at least he gives me a discount. I hate giving away money. "Master Devin! We see a bright light holding an angel! I think it is Savior!" said a team of scouts. "Release the beast! Wild!" "Yes sir!" This will be interesting.
But maybe with longer chapters...
And I liked how u introduced the characters at the beginning
I love your characters!